I know that this story is only a one-shot, but one of Kagome's lines to her friend Sango, about how Sesshomaru always walks around undressed in front of Kagome got me to thinking........what if Sess was crushing on Kagome, and treated her the way he did because she wasn't fawning all over him like other women did...???... Of course, Sango told Kagome that perhaps Sess had a crush on her and that's why he act mean and snooty to her but Kagome just wrote it off.....until the unexpected birthday present....which turned out to be insulting as well....... Well, I am going around the moon on this but could you do another story, a continuation of this one, that shows some more of Sess and Kags here? Perhaps have Kagome actually use the exercise tape (when she has time to ha ha!) for a few months and perhaps other men start to notice Sess's pretty and toned assistant more that him, hmmm??? Maybe throw Kouga into the mix........or if Kagome got a really great job offer and Sess realizes he is fixing to lose someone very important to him if he doesn't confess....... Oh well....... I am just dreaming anyway...... Thank you for your stories and I hope your muse wakes up soon so you can continue writing once more! Again thanks!!!
LOL That was just mean!
Stella (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Sep 2013
Oh god. I would have killed him for that. It fits the number one rule of "things men must never bring up with women"
Looking forward to seeing the rest of the story unfold!
Liking it.
Oh I would have killed him.. XD...
Happy birthday Kagome.. Now lose weight >.>.......
I love it!
The exercise video was priceless.
The enticing comment was hilarious.
And I don't even want to think about him being extra needy.
Ket (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Sep 2013
My first reaction when I finished reading it was: MORE. I NEED MORE!!!!!
2nd: Kill him for the gift....
Can't wait to see this.
All I can really say is PLEASE consider expanding this! Lol
How awesome would it be if Kagome got her sweet revenge. :3
Miss C (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Sep 2013
Please make a continuation to this story omg!! It is great!!
Ingrid (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Sep 2013
Oh whoops ..... it's a one-shot lol. Well, it could also serve as a first chapter! For being a one-shot, it has a great ending anyhow hahah!!
Ingrid (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Sep 2013
Haha, I love the ending!! This seems like it could be really entertaining. While the concept itself isn't anything terribly new, I think you could put your personal spin on this sort of theme. I enjoy your writing so far ^_^ Sesshoumaru was very in character, and I can't wait to see more of their interactions. I have a feeling that Kagome is going to snap in a very interesting way!
Thanks, keep up the good work :0)
OMG!! ~guffaws loudly~ I was stunned too! Sesshoumaru, that prick! hehehe Please ~gasps~ update soon!
~Voracious
PS: love the details in there!
Monica (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Sep 2013
Hahahahaha... That was an awesome ending! Wish you could make this into a series!
Sheila (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Sep 2013
Great start! Kagome really needs to get drunk after that gift...it could lead to all sorts of fun.
I'm sorry but I'm just a bit disappointed.
I think he has an obsession with fitness that arrogant man! Bahahahaha!
Nice use of the prompt, too. Appearances can be deceiving. XD
This is quite interesting, can't wait for the next chapter.
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