poor Kagome.
Being 15, at an age of that time to usually already (or about to) be married but knowing she would never be....seeing all the horrors she has so far.
But I am worried, how will KAgome sugdue Onigumo once he is well? He is a man and much stronger than Kagome. He could overpower her and harm her. I wonder if she's thought of that...
Nice, keep it coming.
Andrea (Chapter 13) - Tue 14 Jan 2014
It's official, I'm hooked!!
Eroviaa (Chapter 13) - Mon 13 Jan 2014
I have to say I was reserved when I first came into this story. But now I am completely in love with it. FAVE!. BOOKMARKED! I love Sesshomeru's character. He is truely a 'demon' in this story rather than a dog spirit that a lot of stories make him out to be. Kagome's character I have a love hate relationship with. I was a bit put off that she is only 15 in this story and Sesshomeru is like centuries and im sure over 18 in human years (pedo alert? lol) Anyways what I am trying to see is that I love this story. Please update soon. I will be looking out for them. :)
keep it coming
Such a good chapter! Penis analysis made me laugh
I really like this chapter. It's cool that you delved more into the "bad" guy's character and history. It's hard to hate someone that you truly know...which is the dilemma miss Kagome is finding herself in! Great job! I look forward to the next chapter from you :)
Haven (Chapter 13) - Sat 11 Jan 2014
First off you're doing a great job bc I'm all riled up. Ugh, Kagome. I'm all for a compassionate heroine but not at the cost of being an idiot - girl ain't got no sense. As soon as the mofo started joking about his damn hard on, she should have kicked him in the balls. This may sound harsh but it's bc this Kagome is so polarizing, which is a compliment to your writing but at the same time I may have to not read this anymore, I almost can't handle it. I keep smacking my forehead and it hurts. If I was in a theater, I'd be throwing popcorn at the screen and yelling nooooooooooooooooo, girl, don't do it!
I'm wondering if Sesshomaru really left Kagome or if he is watching her believing she will kill Onigumo while he is weak
Aziza Riza (Chapter 13) - Sat 11 Jan 2014
YAAAAAY! An update I'm so happy~
Goodness though....I want to ship Naraku and Kagome together. Bad me xP NarakuxKagome is my other guilty pleasure. Great work, I really am getting more excited as this goes along!
Ariel (Chapter 12) - Fri 10 Jan 2014
Hate to say this but Kagome's just so stupid! If she had made Onigumo admit his wrongs and promise to do good then that'd have been reason enough to write her stupidity off to naivety. I'm glad that Sess finally left her to fend for herself even though I know it's only temporary. :P Can't wait to see the next chapter!
wow....what an interesting story. Cannot wait for more!
Great chapters, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
Shaneka (Chapter 12) - Thu 02 Jan 2014
She should have let him die, just saying, update soon.
Oooh! Cant wait for the next update!! Pls update soon! ~puppy eyes~
~Voracious
Aziza (Chapter 12) - Tue 31 Dec 2013
Oh you're good, I really really really wanted to know what happens next! Wheres Sesshoumaru and whats he doing? Is Onigumo going to recover from that fall? Whats Kagome going to do? Where's that damn Kikyo? SO many questions, please update soon :) and thank you for this update as well !
Happy New Year!
Oh, Suspense... Dun, Dun, Dun!
Haven (Chapter 12) - Mon 30 Dec 2013
Ugh, I'm with Sess on this. Can't wrap my head around Kagome so willingly to help douchery Onigumo after what he'd done to hundreds of people. Meanwhile she yells and screams at Sess after all the many times that he's helped her. I'm so annoyed with Kagome. I have no sympathy. I'm really of the opinion that Sess should just leave her. Leave her, Sess! Leave her to her own devices. Melt the contract and carry on. Don't mind my rant, I'm just ridiculously Team Sess.
Thanks for writing.
Koi (Chapter 11) - Mon 23 Dec 2013
Omg! I had to read this twice it was sooo good. I can't wait untl the next update! I love them two together! I can't wait...i am so excited for the next chapter! lol
Keep it coming!
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