i love this chapter. i hope sesshy never changes and continue to make miko cry heh heh heh.
Hi,
I know I just started your story and i must say it's very good, but I do have to say is that you really need to go back through your story and fix the grammer and the wording.(Not that I'm any good at it sometimes as well. lol) What I mean is that you have several miss spelled words and a lot of your sentecnes are jumble up. I would like to read a story to relax and not worry about anything, so going into your story and having to figure what your saying is kind a hard. I'm sorry if i'm being mean, i don't intend to sound like that, i just want you to do your best and know that your readers are getting the best out of your story. I hope this is helpful to you.
Keep it coming.
Wonderful turn of events! I can not wait for your next installment :-)
I really liked the earth spirits and the reasoning behind Inuyasha's abiity to pass through the well. Great Chapter!
Please continue. I love it
tina (Chapter 24) - Mon 09 Sep 2013
Hi i satarted to read this fic today and i can say one thing.... the fic is awsome. I can not wait to read the noext chapter,and the other,oteher,other,until sesshoumaru fall to Kagome.... Continue the great job...
And please update soon. kisses
Cool chapter, keep it coming.
Another awesome chapter! Cant wait to read more! Keep up the good work!
Buyo does not miss Inuyasha, keep it coming.
Kae (Chapter 23) - Mon 02 Sep 2013
I gotta say, I'm loving your characterization and how well you're keeping to things here!
So sad! Sess is slowly learning about his brother and his pain. This story is very good. Please continue.
Nice, keep it coming.
More please
More, keep it coming.
I just love this whole concept of Sesshoumaru actually living InuYasha's life. Many have done the switch bodies but to add in the memories and feelings and have Sesshoumaru unable to turn them off like he does himself is absolutely perfect. This whole fic, chapter by chapter is just so intriguing I can't get enough.
It's about time that the almighty, better than thou Sesshoumaru learns what it's like to be his hanyou brother. He also needs to give credit to InuYasha's bold strength that kept a part of his own soul still inside his body. Sesshoumaru's soul didn't fight to stay put but InuYasha even when put under a spell still fought to stay inside himself and did.
It's really a benefit to Sesshoumaru that he has some of InuYasha's memories. I think otherwise he wouldn't make it out of this alive. He's too arrogant and self centered to listen and that would have been his downfall. This way, he has some things to help him understand and realize that InuYasha wasn't inferior to himself, just different and humans too. Humans and hanyou may not be as strong or live as long but they are just as important in the circle of like as youkai.
You are doing an awesome job with this fic and I just felt the need to commend you on your imagination and talent. I can honestly say that I feel as though I'm there and watching what is happening as it happens. JEN
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