Holy Hot DAMN!

I am really curious what is going to happen in the next chapter it's really a good story!!!! :D

Awesome story. I can't wait to read what happens next!

I'll be checking every day,

Tasha

I really loved this! Please continue soon!

Lol that was very interesting and very funny! ^_^ I can't wait for your next updates~!

As per your request I submit this mistake for correction:

“Little one, I can taste your blood without even breaking your skin.” His voice rumbled through her and she felt herself clench in her lower regions and she realized that she was very wet down there. “I wonder if your blood will taste as good as good as it smells…”

That was the only one I noticed. It's about half way down the chapter.

Beyond that, loving it so far.

I look forward to the next chapter!

~Starfyre

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

Definetly contiue this. it has a great plot. Love it. 

Hmm! Pretty interesting. I've always loved Halloween themed fics, where the big bad demons come out to prey on tiny little miko. I hope you update soon!~

Hey ther

Ok, does anyone else care for a glass of water?

I mean... Dame... This chapter was INTENCE! *.* And It´s only the first one! I´m dying to read more :D Really nice chapter! ;)

Ps: (very late but…) Happy birthday!

next chapter please