WOW!!!!! This chapter was crazy good! I can't believe all the emotions that were expressed in this chapter! I felt so bad for Inuyasha, but at the same time I understand that it was his fault in the first place that Kagome was sooo exposed...how I love that you made him a dog demon! I think this is the first story that I have read that made Inuyasha's powerful nose take in a story without having to witness the result of the mating, such as the mating mark or the mating scent on Kag. The tree that the action had taken place on was enough to make Inuyasha understand that Kagome is no longer an unmated woman. How crazy! I wonder how Sesshy that crazed sexy sex demon will take when Inuyasha shows up and confronts him. I can't wait until the next chapter to this wonderful fic! Please update sooooooon!!! :)
Cheryl (Chapter 4) - Fri 25 Jul 2014
nicely written, though a little tad long for certain parts but overall smooth story.
marisel (Chapter 4) - Fri 18 Jul 2014
nice chapter wonder how this going to end but another week buuuu
Episode 2 of Sailor Moon Crystal airs this Saturday. Sick chapter and poor Kagome, and please let Kagome get away from Sesshomaru, keep it coming.
Koi (Chapter 4) - Fri 18 Jul 2014
That was sooo good! Poor Kag with not having any control of her emotions...She will come around! I can't wait until the next chapter! I hope that her feelings of hatred and his feelings of uncaring changes into love! I can't wait until you update the next chapter! I would love to know what the council says about his mate!
Yay!!! That chapter was great. I can't wait to see what happens next. Loved it.
awesome update.
hahah bad start sesshy.
smcandy (Chapter 3) - Mon 07 Jul 2014
This story is looking up. I hope Kags does not fall for Sesshy just yet I like that there still a cat and mouse struggle with the two. Keep up the good work Evellin ^^
Sincerely,
Authoress smcandy
Sailor Moon new anime has already premiered Saturday, If you missed it you can watch it on youtube. There's trouble for Sesshomau, keep it coming.
i have a love hate with mate/rape, but oddly i like this, it made me think of 2 fanarts that would go great with this.
Rhonda (Chapter 3) - Sun 06 Jul 2014
Love this Fic...... You hit Sesshoumaru's OC personality and character dead on! As for chapter three it was beautiful! I hope you do enjoy your vacation, but after reading chapter three I'm jonesing already for a follow up...So will be checking this board out two weeks from now!! ;)
Also, since Kags and Sess apparently have been fated I do hope Benton gets her mess in gear...since there has been a lot of damage done. I'm VERY happy to see that Inuyasha has seen the result of what place he has put his friend in for his selfish needs, and I do hope Sango and Mirouku give him hell!
AWESOME<AWESOME FanFic and looking forward to more....
Phyllis (Chapter 2) - Thu 03 Jul 2014
However long it took (and yeah, that was a LONG time) I love it! So descriptive and articulate with the flow of the story. Very nice! You have rekindled my love for this story, and thus my need for it. Please don't wait too long for another update!
Shaneka (Chapter 2) - Wed 02 Jul 2014
Excellent chapter, please update soon.
Ashley (Chapter 2) - Wed 02 Jul 2014
Yeah, so I am going to need a Shower...a cold one...yea do NOT tahe another year to update...do so now...ASAP
Koi (Chapter 2) - Wed 02 Jul 2014
This was sooo good! I hope that you update really soon!!! I can't wait for the next update!
Sailor Moon new anime will premiere on July 5. I'm glad your back after a year. Great chapter, poor Kagome, I hope Sesshomaru falls in love with her and she with him. Please update the next chapters soon and not in a year, keep it coming.
Isa Win (Chapter 2) - Wed 02 Jul 2014
I bet this chapter was really difficult to write.
Rape scenes in general are complicated. I appreciate the fact that you did not transform Kagome into some completely mindless slutty heap who just because he "satisfied" her forgets all about the fact that he actually forces himself on her.
You skillfully dissociated her mind and body. Well done!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Oh wow. that was just... Damn.
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