Keep it coming.
Spelling and grammar are good, has a hook to get people to read the next chapter, raises curiousity with regards to whatever is afflicting inuyasha, avoids repetitive plot elements such as Kikyou/Inuyasha in a clearing, so far so good. 
      
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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