I think it was shitty of the goddess to do this to Kagome while she was pregnant. She could have at least waited until the child was born to be left with Inuyasha. I wanted to scratch her eyes out as I read she was smiling. Also, why is Kagome so calm throughout this chapter. If it were me, I'd be more than hysterical, I'd be out for blood for what they had done to me. Not only was I murdered, so was my child. This chapter just upset me and left me angry (not at you the writer) at the characters.
Keep it coming.
Eve (Chapter 7) - Sun 05 May 2013
OH I can hardly wait to see how this story unfolds.
awaiting your next chapters
Keep it coming
Oh dear! You just took this chapter to another level. I absolutely love the potrayal and the lots-of-things-happening-here theme. You have absolutely delivered on the suspense without giving away the full surprise or taking away the anticipation after such a scene!! This is some awesome work here and I'm loving the amazing improvement against the prev chapters! :)
Yay!Keep feeding us more!!
~Voracious
OMG...Its getting good!! Please tell me you will update soon, I can barely wait!!! Great job.
It's been two months and since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, please update the next chapters soon and not in months. Keep it coming,
I have to admit that I was a little hesitant in reading this story but I gave it a shot and I'm delighted that I did. This fascinating story drew me and I actually enjoyed reading it. In my opinion, it is nicely written--will be looking for future updates. Great job!
Your fic its very good and I like it, please continue the fic...:)
Mai (Chapter 1) - Sat 30 Mar 2013
Great job! I love the beginning so far! I hope you post more up soon! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT! Also I love reading a story not rushing into anything. Keep up the good work!
Happy Easter, Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
This story is interesting, keep it coming.
Terri (Chapter 1) - Fri 15 Mar 2013
Is this an Inuyasha/Kagome pairing or a Sess/Kagome pairing?
Congrats on rolling out your first fic Eli!! And don't worry, the reviews will come rolling in once the fic picks up speed! And yes, the story looks great! :)
~Voracious
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