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SnowyNight22 (Chapter 6) - Sun 07 Jul 2013

you  better update soon, or lord help you  i shall spam you till you do.


Elizabeth (Chapter 6) - Thu 13 Jun 2013

I think it would be most interesting if Sesshomaru went to sit by Goshiboku, and Kagome fell out into his lap.  Well, funny, anyway.  But given that it looks as though she is gaining some massive power and new abilities, it would be better if she floated right over his head as Goshinboku releases her.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Wed 22 May 2013

Keep it coming.


rose (Chapter 6) - Wed 22 May 2013

next chapter please


KEdakumi (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 May 2013

Another good chapter.  :)  One way to have her make an appearence, if she will be in tune with all nature, is have her softly enter the clearing that the group is in and have the trees and plants bow as grass and flowers grow beneath her feet to cushion her walk.  If she wanted to make a misdirected, angry entrance, vines could appear and hold everyone in place as she enters and speaks to them... that would be fun to tick off the local full blooded dog demon with.... :)    For a more flashy entrance, energy could build up in the god tree and burst open like a peeled bannana and allow her to step out of the center, then the tree could heal itself back up.  Another softer enterance would be having a fog settle over the group and seperate them and block all sight, sound and smell from each other... she could meet each seperatly and speak to them of what happen and what's to come.  She could seem to visit each one all seperatly but at the same time so when the fog lifts only moments have passed, but each person knows they spoke with her and then she could walk into the clearing.

However you do it, I only recommend you watch making her *too* strong or too many combinations of different traits.  Everyone, even Lord Fluffy, has a weakness and that's what makes a great story... watching them work towards overcoming it.

Can't wait to see what you do with this.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 May 2013

Both chapters are great, keep it coming.


(Chapter 1) - Tue 21 May 2013

Thank you guyYou're your input. Teresa your ideas are really close to my actual idea of what Kagome is to be :) Isurest in what she is to be but I'm not set on how she is to be revealed


teresa daniel (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 May 2013

HI, LOVE THE FANFIC SO FAR.............I HAVE SOME POSSIBLE IDEAS.......YOU COULD HAVE THE KAMI ,,,,,,,,,, TURN KAGOME INTO A  '' ''''''IMMORTAL INUYOUKAI-MIKO-GODDESS OF NATURE'''''''..........THEN SHE COULD HEAL THE EARTH AS THEY GO THRU TIME TO PREVENT SO MUCH POLLUTION TO THE PLANET AS GODDESS OF NATURE........AND AS MIKO-YOUKAI SHE WOULD HAVE NO PROLEM KILLING EVIL YOUKAI OR EVIL HUMANS TO PROTECT HER LOVED ONES AND THE INNOCCENT......ALSO SHE COULD  BE AN '''' ANCIENT PROPHECY FORTOLD  THOUSANDS OF YEARS AGO TO BE THE SAVIOR OF THE DEMON RACE '''',,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,AS HER POWERS SHE CAN TALK TO AND CONTROL ALL PLANTS,ANIMALS,,,,,AND CAN CREATE AND CONTROL ALL ELEMENTS (EARTH,WIND,WATER,ICE,FIRE,LIGHTNING,WEATHER,SHADOWS, AND TIME) ,,,,,,,,,SHE ALSO HAS TELEPORTATION AND CAN FLY ON A CLOUD LIKE SESSHOUMARU BECAUSE SHE IS INUYOUKAI,,,,,,,,AS MIKO SHE CAN HEAL ANY INJURY OR ILLNESS,REGROW  BODY PARTS LIKE KAGURA"S HEART, SESSHOUMARU'S ARM, AS A GODDESS SHE CAN BRING BACK KOHAKU SONGO'S BROTHER,OR GIVE KANNA A SOUL,,,,SHE CAN ALSO DESTROY A  TRULLY EVIL SOUL WITH THE PERMISSION OF THE KAMI,,,, SINCE THAT IS ONE OF THE MANY REASONS THEY CREATED HER. HOPE THIS GIVES YOU SOME IDEAS ,,,,,HOPE TO SEE AN UPDATE REALLY SOON................................................................................TDANIEL

 


Starfyre (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 May 2013

Loved the updates!

I look forward to more!

~Starfyre


rose (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 May 2013

next chapter please


Nechi (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 May 2013

Well i can suggest two ways author-san

1. The tachi can be sleeping/camping by the well when a bright light wakes or grab their attention and the next thing they know Kagome is          standing there.

OR

2. Kagome can just appear silently or subtly and the 1st to notice her would be her son shippou.

Any which way you want to go will be fine.


Leahchan13 (Chapter 4) - Sun 19 May 2013

Ah! Please update whenever you can! I'm lovin' it~!


Rosalynn (Chapter 4) - Thu 16 May 2013

Wow..... UPDATE!


shintochick (Chapter 4) - Thu 16 May 2013

I love this so far and can't wait to see where you go with it. Kagome's connection with Goshinbuku is very unique. Please keep updating. 


Eve (Chapter 3) - Wed 15 May 2013

I'm liking this story.

Hope you update again soon!

You have me intriged as to what is going on with Kagome.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 May 2013

Both chapters are great, keep it coming. Happy Mother's Day!


Leahchan13 (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 May 2013

Hmm~! I wonder what will happen next! 


rose (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 May 2013

next chapter please


Midnight (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 May 2013

I like it so far. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more. ^_^


Leahchan13 (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 May 2013

Whoa! I love it! Please update soon please!


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