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LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Tue 19 Mar 2013

I hope Kagome get back at Kagome, keep it coming.


ashley jones (Chapter 5) - Tue 19 Mar 2013

I love your story. I don't know what you're going to make your next chapters about, but I hope they involve Kagome escaping and getting the cinollar off:) 


anime queen 88 (Chapter 5) - Tue 19 Mar 2013

ok then just update


Amber (Chapter 5) - Tue 19 Mar 2013

I love your story so far. 


LivingInDarkness (Chapter 4) - Tue 19 Mar 2013

that was a great chapther, I must admit that the previous was a little vague, but this was way better, continue like this


Anonymous (Chapter 5) - Tue 19 Mar 2013

Your storyline does not flow. Chapter 5 just jumps out at you without any explaination as to why she is sore and bruised. Also you have some spelling errors. 


LivingInDarkness (Chapter 5) - Tue 19 Mar 2013

I was a little lost at the beginning of the chapther, it was confusing, the situation moved to quickly from her capture of the previous chapter to already being marked in this one, but overall it was a good chapter


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 5) - Tue 19 Mar 2013

um it feels like there's a chapter missing, last we saw he was carrying her home, then the next thing we saw they were waking up in his bed, then onlky the talk of abuse through the night. really some of this seems a bit out of context, i wouldnt think he'd beat her while smutting, if he's supposed tob e charishing her  and all, i dunno it seems very conflicting.


leon (Chapter 5) - Tue 19 Mar 2013

i love your history!!!!!please continue!!!!


Silverfurred (Chapter 5) - Mon 18 Mar 2013

Damn this is hot. :D Can't wait for more!

 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Mon 18 Mar 2013

I don't like this Sesshomaru, he should get his butt kick. Keep it coming.


rose (Chapter 5) - Mon 18 Mar 2013

cant wait for the next chapter


Masa (Chapter 5) - Mon 18 Mar 2013

I love ur story but it feels like you skipped over a lot between the last 2 chapters.


FayeMegan (Chapter 4) - Mon 18 Mar 2013

This looks very promising and I hope you really play up the D/s elements I'm sensing! :3 favorited! Update soon, please.


rose (Chapter 4) - Mon 18 Mar 2013

i love this story so far i cant wait for the next chapter


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 4) - Mon 18 Mar 2013

Sesshomaru is so evil, he should be nice to her! Keep it coming.


Brittany (Chapter 3) - Thu 14 Mar 2013

Love this!!! I can't wait to read more. :)


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Fri 01 Mar 2013

Keep it coming.


Silverfurred (Chapter 2) - Wed 27 Feb 2013
Interesting. I can't wait to see where this goes. :D

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Wed 27 Feb 2013

Keep it coming.


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