This was a really goo story. I loved every minute of it; espeically the end.
That was nice but that would be a verry odd way to live but i think i would like to see a demon maybe in my dream and imagination but it would be truely amazing
namine (Chapter 1) - Fri 29 Aug 2008
| There seems to be something wrong with your text... one can't see the end of the lines or is it just my computer messing with me?
Tilayha (Chapter 1) - Fri 29 Aug 2008
| I am having trouble reading the end of the sentanced. I think you may need to reformat the chapter and resubmit it.
Jriiann (Chapter 1) - Fri 29 Aug 2008
| there is something wrong with your text. the sentences are partially cut off.
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