short, sweet, and lovely~with lemon-y goodness at the end. keep writing fan fiction like this and i'll be sure to read it and give good reviews. keep up the great writing. c'ya'
You sucessfully created a fluff-filled lemon! Great work :) Thanks for writing.
Awwwh, I love this story. The sexual tension, the developing relationship: they were done well. I do wish the story was longer. Thanks for sharing your creativity.
There, is it? BEST LINE EVER!!! Lol
You have instantly become my favorite author on this site!! I absolutely love your stories! Please don't ever stop!
Yay! A lovely little taste of fluff before I go back and catch up on APM. :)
I read this story a while back and never had the chance to review with relish, being an anonymous reader then... it was quite a task searching for it, to do just that..... so here I am.... Loved it....:)
I really liked this fics. It was very sweet. :D
wow what an awesome story,,,but now that she's his mate.....will he go back home?Was marking her as his mate the reason why he didn't return?
Was awesome nice job, short and sweet..
I could read this over and over again. Oh wait, I did just read it over and over again!!!
Awesome my dear!
This story was so sweet! I loved it!
This story was amazing! Filled with fluff and cuteness! I really enjoyed the last chapter! It was very fluffy yet erotic at the same time! You definitely succeeded in portraying that!
Fantastic story! I am actually sad to see it over ^^
LOVED IT!!! What a great culmination to all the tension between the two. You did splendidly!!
I loved the chapter and loved the story. Totally awesome work!
This chapter was HOT!! The Story was awesome, amazing and it had a beautiful ending, and I also enjoyed it!
This was a beautiful story and "HAWT" ending...lol! Great job!
Yay! Finally they're getting somewhere! It took them long enough!
Ohhh, now that was some hot, steamy progress *fans herself* You know, I don't blame Kagome...even an experienced woman would forget how to breathe if she were in her place lol
Loved the chapter! Can't wait for the final - naughty - chapter! You had a great idea for 'agate' ^^
Keep it coming.
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