A good fic! A pity it isn't updated in years and probably abandoned! But I had so much hope for this! Sighs in defeat... Maybe you would consider updating? Please?
I bet it was all a plot of inupapa to get them together by first putting them apart (to make Sesshomaru realize how much he loves Kagome)! And now that it utterly failed, he has to get them back together somehow. Wouldn't be surprised if he bribed Kouga's father in some way.
Anyway, loved the dramatic scene out in the torrential rain, with the kissing and stuff :D Though I still think Kagome should have just told him sooner, and Sesshoumaru should be less oblivious. Oh well, I do hope they'll make up in the end! And I wonder where Kagome's going :O
Keep it coming.
"man slut" had to laugh at that. Can we still call it a b***h slap if she slaps a male dog? Hmmmm.....
I hope she realizes that it was Inupapa's fault too. It looks like, in his quest to spoil his oldest, he arranged (read: bribed) for them to be in all the same classes sitting next to each other and arranged for Kouga to be shipped off instead of dealing with the problem that is his oldest son's personality.
Good story, can't wait to see what happens next.
Both chapters are great, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
Qiwi (Chapter 6) - Wed 02 Jan 2013
It's cute to read about Kagome and Kouga together :) This was a nice chapter, continue! :D
Qiwi (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Jan 2013
Sesshoumaru, why are you being so stubborn?! :( I feel so bad for Kagome, though she should have just admitted she likes him!
Sesshomaru is so stupid to give up a friendship off of something so small smh...and Kagura needs to go somewhere with herself she ain't sugar honey iced tea if you ask me. Keep it coming i can't wait for an update
Luna C. (Chapter 6) - Wed 02 Jan 2013
Ugh Sesshomaru's being an asshole! mooo, hurting Kagome like that, if I was her, I would have smacked the crap outta him for over-reacting over a boy! I don't see Kagome saying anything about his company! Shoot Kagome too nice. -___- Hahaha!
Kar (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Jan 2013
Ill take my chances with the Twinkie factory lmao! Too hilarious! I need more! More!
KAR
angie (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Jan 2013
i love this story nd can hardly wait for the next chapter. please update soon
Keep it coming.
Qiwi (Chapter 4) - Mon 31 Dec 2012
Oh Sesshoumaru, you're so violent when you get overprotective :D I kind of feel bad for Kagome though, since he's chasing every single person that could possibly like her away she is never going to get the chance to get over him. Too bad he doesn't realize :O
I spotted a small mistake which confused me though: "She was just glad that Kouga could spot her lie." I guess this should be "couldn't", since otherwise it would not make sense for Sesshoumaru to never realize whenever she's lying?
Anyway, the end of the chapter was sweet and funny, looking forward to more!
Andrea (Chapter 3) - Sun 30 Dec 2012
I'm glad I found this story, I'm really enjoying it! Looking forward to more :) Oh, and I kinda think the Kouga thing is cute if it can be dragged out a bit to show Sesshomaru being jealous, I wouldn't complain ;)
Keep it coming, Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Haven (Chapter 3) - Sun 30 Dec 2012
I'm enjoying the story so far. I'm confused bc is this supposed to be a canon story? Anyway, more updates please!
Luna C. (Chapter 3) - Sun 30 Dec 2012
Lol I like this story so far! It's funny. But I've noticed that you put 'junior' instead of 'senior'.
Qiwi (Chapter 3) - Sun 30 Dec 2012
Haha, the last part with Mr. Taisho made me laugh :) Keep it coming!
Keep it coming.
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