I mean I do like this , because I like romance, but this is very OC and it seems very rushed. You started the love a lot, and if you add more build up I think this story could take the cake. Add a little more detail and just slow down a little hun C:

-Cammii

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Aha I can imagine Sesshomaru smiling like a fool, also nice chapter and sesshy being OOC like that is kinda cute to, keep up the good work

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AHHHHHH!!! The day has finally come!!! Continue please!!!

Keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

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Sessho is becoming so horny! muahahahaha kagome is gonig to be so sore in the morning lol but oh well it's worth it isn't it? well i love it and continue

Damn, horn dog is right...lmao!

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ahahaa you made rin very well, she always is the smart one, and i just wanna see sesshomaru's face when he had to explain to rin how pups were made lol it'll be priceless but really amazing chapter love it and continue on!

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Give a flashback on Sesshomaru telling Rin where babies comes from. It should be good.

Why can I see sesshomaru's face telling Ron how pups are made?

:) it was good update ??

-TheNight

Ah young love.... :)

Update fOr my liking please.?

-TheNight

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Awesome story. This will be a fun meeting when his mother finds out that her only son has mated with a human

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Awww such a wonderful lemon I should say, and sessho's n other seems nice I wonder what she'll turn out to be in your fanfic

Babies babies babies!!

Updates soon?

-TheNight-