Very well done. xD Including with Hayame. My character Hayame! xD
But yes, I liked this chapter. Even though I'm your beta and already know what it is. xD /shot
~~Final chapter today?? How cruel and unusual...T__T This fic, so far, is one of my favorites! It's honestly probably one of the only times that I like all of the OC characters and they all have real and distinguishable personalities! Despite how sad it makes me when I read how well Chi and Sesshy get along I just remind myself that it's a Kag x Sessh fic and I feel better...lol that and they're pack, so it's understandable. ^_^ Please update soon! I'll be most delighted if you do!
All seven chapters are great, keep it coming, Happy New Year!
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
monica (Chapter 5) - Thu 29 Nov 2012
The story is verygood but it appears that your missing a chapter. When did Chiyoko's group come across Inuyasha group again? At the end of chapter 4 Sesshomaru was disparaging Inuyasha for losing a fight to a female and Chiyoko and Co. is nowhere in the area.
Keep it coming.
Love it! I look forward to seeing what happens next!
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Laura (Chapter 3) - Tue 30 Oct 2012
I love it! Great story!!!! Keep it up! :-)
Love it! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Keep it coming.
Phoenix (Chapter 3) - Tue 30 Oct 2012
Love this story!
Love it! I look forward to seeing what happens next!
-Forgotten!
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
I completely adore this, please please please update soon, I honestly cannot wait to read more!
Interesting! I look forward to seeing what happens next!
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