You make me blush... I love where its going now. Inuyasha definately has some problems. I cant wait to see the next chapter.
I would like to know whats going on in Kagome's head. In addition, the group just accepts Kikyou without a fight? I dont know I think there should be a little more drama there.
Keep it coming.
I can't wait to see what happens next!!
The chapter was great! I cant wait to read the next.
Keep it coming.
Poor Kagome! I'm glad that Sesshomaru was there to revive her. Update soon!
Love it.
inukoi (Chapter 1) - Sat 15 Sep 2012
I like the start of your story and can't wait to read more. Just a small tip for you, try reading your chapters out loud it should help you pick up on any wording mistake and help you make the wording flow a bit better. But its a great concept.
The story sounds interesting, but the grammar needs a little work. I mean the spelling looks alright but you didn't capalize any of the I's or the names of the people talking. XD (just thought to tell you).
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
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