Kagome should totally be alpha bitch!! That and she is like with Sesshomaru in a way... anyway this is a interesting turn of events in this fanfic, like it alot. You should make Kagome go all badass since she is so instinctal... 

Keep it coming.

Much better for chapter two! Still needs improvements....but you're progressing! As long as your open to suggestions (and it seems you are).........I recomend spellcheck if you are working in Micorsoft Word. If you press F7 while in Word, it brings up spellcheck automatically. Just FYI. That should really get rid of the capitialization problems. Other than that, progressing nicely. I'm surprised to see such improvement! :) Makes me more inclined to read your story than I originally was. 

Well Rin is Kagome relitave.. I've only seen that happen in two fanfics and one where she was related to one of Kagome's friends. Interesting turn of events... UPDATE SOON.

Keep it coming.

So I had someone message me saying that they ripped of my story 'Inu Pack Females' and so I came to check it out to see if it was true. Yeah there simaliar but there different. Anyway I can't see more of your story, I'm kind of interested in how it will turn out and I'm thinking about revising mine... But over all I'm like no this person didn't rip of my story although it is really simaliar , I even made Sango a golden Inuyoukai in my story and Kagome a half youkai and stuff. I also had Inuyasha, Miroku, Sesshomaru, and another brother into the mix. Although Inutaisho is alive in my story... I don't know if he is in yours are not. I really like this, its in touch with a more... beastly side are animal side I should say. So Please update soon!

This story sounds interesting, is this a foursome?

this was awesome. cant wait for more. keep up the good work and writing. 

It has good potential, I recommend a beta at the least. 

I'm not trying to insult, but Songo should be Sango, and there needs to be some grammatical improvement.

I hope to see your improvements.

Like the idea. Needs SERIOUS editing, however. Please consider capitalization and starting a new paragraph after someone new speaks.  speaks.  Not trying to flame, just a couple starting suggestions.