I've been reading your story and have a question... earlier on I read Sesshoumaru's heir to be named
Toshihiro, but now that he has met with Kagome, his name has changed to Masahiro. You may want to search throgh your story and fix that for the sake of continuity... I think I noticed because I am reading your story all at once vs. week by week.
Aaaaah, such a tasty and fun story! Truly, I cannot wait to see where this will go! Do not apologize for your absence anymore. You have a life with goals, desires anresponsibilities. It's terrible to think some of your reviewers are giving you such a hard time
this story is one of my favs thus far. You have taken your time with this couple took didn't rush the character development. Ill be keeping an eye out for more.
Thank you for this awesome story.
Aaaaah, such a tasty and fun story! Truly, I cannot wait to see where this will go! Do not apologize for your absence anymore. You have a life with goals, desires anresponsibilities. It's terrible to think some of your reviewers are giving you such a hard time
this story is one of my favs thus far. You have taken your time with this couple took didn't rush the character development. Ill be keeping an eye out for more.
Thank you for this awesome story.
Denise (Chapter 34) - Wed 29 May 2013
I want to say that I love your story. I can't wait to see how long it takes Kagome to realize that Sesshoumaru has feelings for her. Amazing job, keep up the good work :)
I will not lie. I have become addicted to your story and I'm always devouring the chapters as I go along! On starting this chapter I hadn't realized there was no following chapter. So when I got to the end and went to go start the next chapter I was startled to find no 'next chapter arrow'. With a small laugh and a muttered 'so cruel!' In reference to your little cliffy I headed here to leave my ramble of a review. I love the way the characters interact, it feels like they could come right of the page and I could watch them. The plot line has thrown me in so many amazed giggles I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
With my ramble now over, I plead for an update. Your faithful reader, ~Sy
Poor Sesshomaru! Stuck at 99% bad in Kagome's point of view. I wish him luck in the following chapters.
Now on I go! ~*~skips merrily~*~
Wow.... He's dense! I'd think he'd be able to smell the pup on Kagome, unless she covered it.
Oh well! On to the next chapter! ~*~fan fair~*~
Eve (Chapter 34) - Mon 29 Apr 2013
I really like this story. I can hardly wait for your next chapter!
*phew* I caught up, because of work I haven't been able to read and it's taken me a couple days to catch up. But I can't believe that Inuyasha would do that to Kagome or their unborn child. He deserves every damn form of torture for that foolishness he planted into his own godforsaken head. But anyway imma need Sesshomaru to tell Kagome how he feels about her soon, the tension is killing me and im getting anxious
Love the emotion in this chapter. Can't wait to see where you go with it.
I just love love LOVE this story. Your writing is so wonderful and the plot so intruiging. I hope to read lots more soon. May the evil dragon hoe die and maybe the twins be reunited in the whole not dead way. And lets all KILL your Inuyasha. His betrayl of not just Kagome, but his own child and his honor was so well written.
Awwww!!! I hope Kagome will FINALLY come clean and tell Sesshomaru what really happened with Inuyasha! I hope she will trust him that much so he will understand why she's os wary of another relationship!!!
Please update ASAP! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Oh, and what about Miroku and Sango? Will they hunt Inuyasha down and kill him for what he did to Kagome and is planning on doing?
mari (Chapter 34) - Wed 17 Apr 2013
thanks for the update loved it.
rose (Chapter 34) - Wed 17 Apr 2013
next chapter please
~~Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyy!!! XD I cannot even tell you how happy and contented I am with this chapter!! It explained things so well, and I feel like it helped to understand what was going on in their heads...Fantastic job! XD And I have a feeling that it's only going to get better... *cackles evily* Oh! And I'm almost finished painting the pic! :D
Denise (Chapter 34) - Wed 17 Apr 2013
Story is coming out great. I like this story a lot. I like the story line very much, can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work. :D
Keep it coming.
AAAAAAAAAh. Kagome! Your denseness is so frustrating! >.<
Lovely chapter. So pleased as a whole with the story.
I await more greatness!
--Silver
AAAAAAAAAh. Kagome! Your denseness is so frustrating! >.<
Lovely chapter. So pleased as a whole with the story.
I await more greatness!
--Silver
OMG....I feel like I've been waiting for this update for what it feels like FOREVER!!!, bit I must say it was really worth the wait because I LOVED IT!!! Please dont take too long to update again!! (Pretty please with wipped cream, sprinckles, and cherry on top ^.^ )
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