Nicee, very niice also very original. I loved it 

Interesting, new style that I haven't seen before; I'd like to see more. It was funny and entertaining. I just wish these were chapter stories though to know exactly what Kagome did to make Sesshomaru pee on her.

This is just laugh out loud funny! Great start!

why do iwhy do i have the feeling something bad is going to happen like sesshomaru getting his a** handed to him by a pissed off miko

Wow that was funny Iaughed all the way through.

I would truly love for this to be a well thought out chapter series.  Chapter 7 made me lose it and then the of course there's that very last line in Chaoter 15.    Very good, very nice.

Quite amusing story ;D

All three chapters are great, keep it coming.

Hahaha!! Yess, seeing him with a smile isn't such a good thing.

o.0

Other? Bodily? Fluids?...........

W. T. F?

I'm almost afraid to find out... almost.

I wonder how long it will take him to realize that he intends to pup her?

As in making pups with her.

lol

should be interesting and I really really really can't wait for your next update!

~Starfyre

Both chapters are great, keep it coming.

Keep it coming.

Lol. I wonder what she will do.

Well, I figured out why a smiling Sesshoumaru is a dangerous Sesshoumaru... I watched a Japanese series the other day and it was mentioned that back during the days when everyone was apparently monkeys, we bare our fangs to scare out enemy. But sometime said enemy in the bushes turned out to be some friendly stalker...friend, ahem... So it was too late to cover the fangs and we turned the snarling face into what we deemed as a smile today. So.... a smile was a way to show that we aren't going to cause them harm but if they did anything remotely unacceptable...well...the fangs are there...

Not a wonder why some smile are just plain scary...

Keep it comin.

I like what you are doing with this! Very interesting. Can't wait to read more.

Keep it coming.

Interesting style of writing. You had me smile quite a few times!

I look forward to reading more and seeing where you're heading with this! :)

Keep it coming.

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.