This reminds me of pochohantos or whatever the Disney movie was with John smith and the native girl! Cool concept shame it's abandoned fanfiction can be cheesy I have to weed through the terrible ones I read but this is good but now there's no update smh 

This reminds me of pochohantos or whatever the Disney movie was with John smith and the native girl! Cool concept shame it's abandoned fanfiction can be cheesy I have to weed through the terrible ones I read but this is good but now there's no update smh 

This reminds me of pochohantos or whatever the Disney movie was with John smith and the native girl! Cool concept shame it's abandoned fanfiction can be cheesy I have to weed through the terrible ones I read but this is good but now there's no update smh 

Good story 

Nothing brings people together more than planning an escape. They are both stubborn individuals so its interesting to see who butts their head harder. I can't wait to see what happens next and if Rin implements her plan before they implement theirs :)

Keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

More, more, more, more,MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE!!!! LOL!

KAR

please update I love this story

Keep it coming.

This has to be one of the mot creative and orginal stories that i've read in a while and i read alot of them, lol. A definite breath of fresh air! Aside from the actual storyline, the writing is very good, too many times have i seen a brilliant story fall to poor grammar and horrific writing styles if you can even call them that. I'm so glad that this story was not one of them. the characters while a bit OOC, that's freedom of writing and its not so vastly and ridiculously different to the point where it makes the charcters difficult to picture, both characters are quite easy to picture and with that in additi to the well worded descriptions, the movie in my head has been quite enjoyable up to this point. I do hope to see more from this story, i'll be looking out for it. :)

Well at least Kagome is out of that awful place and with someone that will take care of her. Wonder how long it will take though for her to be good enough to travel, and travel that far apperantly. Prob enough time for Rin to put her plan in place, really looking forward to that. I can't wait to see what happens next and how it brings Kagome and Sesshoumaru closer together :)

Keep it coming.

Yay, you updated! Great chapter and good luck with your move. :)

finally indeed, sooo when is the next chapter? lol

KAR

your such a tease girl!!!

lovin this more and more each chapter.

update and soon please!!

Keep it coming.

WWoWooWoohWooho!

hmmm interesting.... interesting indeed....

KAR

Well the damsel almost rescued herself. Wonder how Sesshoumaru's crack at it will turn out. I can't wait to see what happens next and hope that every dog does have his day :)

Keep it coming.