OMG!!! WHAT AN AWESOME CHAPTER! I have to know more about the laws, and Kagome's idiot uncle and the background story of Tashio and Kagomes dad! This is really interesting! I hope that they make Hideki suffer. No mating allowed?! That's just cruel! I can't believe him! Someone should just throw him into a pit full of demons. That's called Justice. XD
I can't wait for the next update!!!
I like it! ^.^ update soon pwease!
Great story, please update soon.
Nea (Chapter 2) - Mon 04 Jun 2012
EEEEEEE the story line is awesome i can't wait for more updates, and more intimate Sesshomaru and Kagome moments. Keep going! More UPDATES more UPDATES!!!
Oooh! Sounds really interesting. I can't wait to read more about what happens next. Also more background on Miroku and Inuyasha ( and Sesshoumaru). This sounds like it's gonna get really good! I can't wait for the next update! I understood that Miroku thought that Kagome was Kikyo.
This is a really interesting story line. I can't wait to read more about what type of trouble Kagome got into! Your writing style is very clean, organized, and easy to read and understand. There were a few grammar mistakes but overall it was nicely written. I also like the detail and how the verbal conversation was presented. I hope that you update soon!
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