Excellent chappie, please continue this story until it is finished, it is fascinating!
I love it so far, it is very refreashing I like how you keep Sesshomaru in character, alote of writers have a hard time in doing so, and I love how you build it up, the details in this story is amazing, I love the fact how you put information about first borns and how there names are giving that is like "Wow", keep it up I can't wait to read the rest. 
  
Update soon. 
  
Hugs 
  
megan007 
I do love a good mating season fanfic, this seems good, and well into his character insead of out of character. 
  
-_~ 
      
dianne (Chapter 1) -  Sat 12 May 2012 
This is so interesting! I wonder what's wrong with inuyasha and if it has anything to do with the mating season. I cant wait to see what happens when sessh comes into the picture! 
I dont think you can ever have too much detail. It gives the reader a chance to visualize the story even better so dont worry about that. 
I cant wait to see what you have planned for this story! untill next time! 
      
I like it! Really interesting so far, update soon~ please ^_^ 
      
Nenyanna (Chapter 1) - Sat 12 May 2012 
Wonderful story thus far! 
      
I loved the concept!  Great start!  I can't wait for more!  I always love how you build Sesshomaru's character, he's always so cool and calculating.  You do it so well!  Please write more!! 
      
Suka25 (Chapter 1) -  Sat 12 May 2012 
ohhhh more!!!!!!!!!! good job! 
      
Emma (Chapter 1) -  Sat 12 May 2012 
Poor Inuyasha haha 
      
Awesome first chapter and very descriptive (thankfully!).  However...GAH!  what a horrible cliffie!  Hope you update soon! 
      
This story is interesting, please update soon. 
      
I'm really into this story. Update soon! 
      
Pricila (Chapter 1) -  Sat 12 May 2012 
You got me, I am in intrigue and want to know what happens next! 
      
Oh :D Dreamerz inlove with this story ^.^ I always enjoy a good Sesshoumaru in heat story :D  I'll be waiting with baited breath for the next chapter 
  
Lots of Love, 
~Dreamerz~ 
      
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