More chappies, what does Sessh do to help her?Please I must know!
Miyukiyama (Chapter 2) - Thu 16 Feb 2012
Oh god this is sad! But I find myself looking forward to more. While I certainly have never experienced being cheated on, I have seen what it does to a person and I find your portray of it to be well written. Keep up the good work.
Very interested to see where this is going! Great work so far!!!
update soon i like this
Kayelyn (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Feb 2012
I think that the emotions are really well done. It's how I would feel, at least until anger set in. It's a fine line to walk though. It's easy to make her an emotional git or a shrew. It's got a good flow to it, and it's well written. Keep writing, and I will keep reading.
It's a really good chapter, it shows a lot of emotion. I can't wait for the rest
good morning...I wanted to say this is a good story...It is well done...
I can't wait to see what happens next.
good job and update soon...
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