Good story! I think they are all still IC. I, also, would love to see a stronger Kagome to topple Sesshoumaru off that pedistal. Boy's holding his nose so high in the air, he'd drown in a rain storm. :P
Can't wait for more!
Your portrayals are awesome! But I would LOVE to see Kagome stand up to Sesshoumaru! If she can stand up to an out-of-control Inuyasha, why not a jerk-some Sessh?!
I'm totally looking forward to some more updates!!! This is an awesome fic!! Thanks for sharing it!!
Maracuya-chan (Chapter 4) - Sat 24 Mar 2012
| Oohh!the suspense! I'm really liking the story. This chapter is such a cliff hanger, I neeed to know what happens next. Sess is such an asshole, I wished kagome would zap his arrogant ass! Haha. I think ur characterizations are good but yeah I think Kagome could be emotionally stronger, she really should have slapped him or something (he was beyond cruel, she NEEDED to inflict bodily harm on him, I mean how is it that she can osuwari inuyasha but just let sesshomaru go?), to have him respect her because now he just thinks she's weak n powerless so she should somehow showcase her powers and earn some of his respect reluctantly. That would be my only point, I wanna see a kick ass kagome who can stand up and match sesshomaru. I am looking forward to ur next chapter
I believe that you've gotten better at writing, too. Although, your previous writing was awesome, somehow, you've managed to up even that. LOL. Thank you for the lovely chapter.
Deana (Chapter 4) - Fri 23 Mar 2012
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one. You kept Sesshoumaru very much in character. Good job!
Good chapter. Shippo's so right when he describes the brothers. Would love to see Sess get knocked down a few pegs and realize he needs her.
bella (Chapter 4) - Fri 23 Mar 2012
please uptdate soon
I enjoyed this very much! Especially the interaction between Kagome and Sesshomaru towards the end of the chapter in terms of both being in character. In many fics, I found that their views of each other changed far too quickly to be believable. You got their feelings for each other spot on.
Can't wait to read more!
Ero (Chapter 4) - Fri 23 Mar 2012
For such a long worded chapter nothing really happened. Kagome through a childish fit thats pretty much it. She said that matured in her time here but she throwing hissy fits and pouting and shouting 'i hate you'. Hmmmm matured indeed :p I fee like she is still 15 if not 14 in this story. How old is she supposed to be?
Awesome chapter! I love the detail you put into the character's feelings. It really gives incite into what they are feeling. I really hope that Inuyasha doesn't go all angry crazy person on everyone because of his pent up anger. That would really suck.
Very nicely done! I cannot wait for the next update!
Venita (Chapter 3) - Mon 05 Mar 2012
Great chapter, please update soon.
Oh lord, Inuyasha is jealous! Haha. Sesshomaru is such a booty. I say that in a good way, of course. Lol. Thank you for the lovely update.
Akiko88 (Chapter 3) - Mon 05 Mar 2012
| yeahhhh a new chapter!! I was waiting it so much :) This story is proceeding wonderfully... I like your style and the way you describe Sesshomaru... Wow! The great lord who permit a human to feed him?? It's a miracleee :P ahahahah... I can't wait to read more, so please update soon! Don't make us wait too much ;) bye byeeeee!
jhiz (Chapter 3) - Sun 04 Mar 2012
I adore how very upset Inuyasha is at the unconscious caring attitudate and purposeful physical care Kagome is showing his half-brother. It is VERY realistic to how I think it would happen. He would hate it but he is a good enough person to not want to truly hurt Kagome over it. I think you capture this well. Sesshomaru's haunty enjoyment at the half breeds distress is also quite realistic. Even siblings that love one another can have rivalry issues and these two take the term to extreme. Thank you for sharing this story. It is quite enjoyable to read.
KT (Chapter 3) - Sun 04 Mar 2012
Sesshoumaru is so ungrateful for all Kagome's help. I almost feel like saying that Kagome is too nice for her own good. Nice chapter. Keep up the great work!
Venita (Chapter 2) - Mon 30 Jan 2012
Great story, please update soon.
Venita (Chapter 2) - Mon 30 Jan 2012
Great story, please update soon.
Avidreader (Chapter 2) - Sun 29 Jan 2012
This story is great! Love the IC characters and injured or not, you can't help but want to slap Sesshomaru sometimes...or drool and ogle him. Nicely detailed and great style - thankfully it's not rushed.
Looking forward to your updates!
Akiko88 (Chapter 2) - Sun 29 Jan 2012
Yeahhhhhhhh a new chapter!
Poor Kagome....dealing with a such mortal beauty, I've probably had a heartattack!
The wounds are dressed...now I want to see the recover :D ahahahaha and the feeding!
Update soon!! :) and compliment for your style, I like it...
Bye bye!!
Akiko88
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