I'm so excited that you're doing a drabble series! Seems like the next step after all your other pieces of amazingness!
Wow, this is a great start. There was a few comma mishaps, but nothing that was a big deal at all. I'm excited to see what comes next in this story. 
      
Luna (Chapter 1) -  Tue 17 Jan 2012 
wooo looking forward for more!!! 
      
This was a great way to start the story. I'm very excited for what is to come. 
      
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