| I love it I'll probably sound weak for this but I ended up crying at the end. It was really that good at least to me
       
L-desu (Chapter 1) -  Tue 22 Jul 2008 
| a diamond in the rough. aside from a few typos and grammatical errors, this piece was very nice. i especially liked the poem along with it, or is that a song?
       
| That was beautiful - good job!
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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