Great job I love this story POOR KAGOME I wish I was her sometimes and sometimes I'm glad I'm not update soon
*pouts like petculent child* r0o no monster!
though i liked that chapter, it was lovely, and it shows he really cares for her, and she for him that she'd even be upset at the idea that its all a dream. i adored it ^_^
- your monster0o
i'm not mad about that, this was a wonderful chapter! though i do wonder what your going to do now! - r0o
Maddie (Chapter 9) - Thu 25 Dec 2008
I super deduper love this story. Hope the next chapter comes soon
Maddie (Chapter 8) - Thu 11 Dec 2008
I think this is a great story can't wait for the next chapter this is exciting no one knows whats going to happen next (except maby u ^_^)
Possessed (Chapter 8) - Tue 23 Sep 2008
| This is a nice story! Your writing seems to become more refined with each chapter, and I thought the love scene was very touching. Good job!
adriana (Chapter 7) - Sun 17 Aug 2008
| this is a really good story! :]
I deffinately choose option B! :DD
update soon!
adriana (Chapter 7) - Sun 17 Aug 2008
| this is a really good story! :]
I deffinately choose option B! :DD
update soon!
| This story is really good! I'm gonna go with option B
| A! just found this story and read the A/N at the bottom of chappie 7, I pick A!!!!! *^_^* update soon
| Idk im leaning towards b or c. any ways great chapter and post again soon please!!!
Chaos
| I would have to pick C. I wanna know who that shadowy &%#$&#% $&#%&$%#%& @$%#&%$ is. He makes me mad.
I would also like to add that I am really enjoying your story thus far. It's a good idea and I can't wait to see where it leads. I also love the perfect turtle ordeal, it makes it seem like he's courting her... which I think he is. Any way keep it up and I can't wait for the next chapter.
| In love with is story. I really thought the idea of Sesshomaru searching all that time for the perfect turtle for her was cute. Any way on the choices I think my hentai self will have to vte letter B just because. Best wishes for you in continueing the story & hoping to read a new chapter soon. ~w/
Nobody (Chapter 2) - Fri 18 Jul 2008
| i like it, especially the idea, there are some mistakes and you repeat yourself a few times, but all easily fixed. A beta might help you a lot. its good i can't wait to see what happens.
| Good story, cant wait to see what happens next. I like the idea of them being forced on the island, really good idea!!
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