I don't even know what to say, I just knew that I HAD to leave a review. I cried, I cried so much reading the last two chapters, I felt like it was happening to me. You have a way with words, I don't even know how to express it, I'm crying right now.
I just wanted to say that you are a brilliant writer and this story is so so beautiful and I along with everyone else eagerly await this last chapter. I have no idea what to expect, I'd like to think I do, but I wont believe it until I read it.
Keep up the good work, you have a real talent.
(sorry I couldn't log in to leave my review)
-danni
I started crying again halfway through the chapter... I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.
TruGemini (Chapter 6) - Sun 25 Dec 2011
Oh! Another heart wrenching chapter. I'm glad that Sess was able to do what he wanted, but is it possible he may be too late? Shippo may not pull out of this one. I hope he does but it doens't look good. Thank you for the update! I can't wait for the closing!
OMG this was awesome! Sesshoumaru at his finest!! I so love it when he's all alpha male! Shippo's sperm donner (so not a father) is a complete asshole. I absolutely loved hating him!!!! I just hope they get everthing they need in time to save shippo. I do believe there is a beautiful family in the making here and I for one would love to see them all happily together!!
Nicka (Chapter 6) - Sun 25 Dec 2011
I love it!!!!!!! Keep it coming
lashon (Chapter 6) - Sat 24 Dec 2011
shippo and miroku's convo was funnyi really hope ship lives and makes it through this. a christmas miracle perhaps :)
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i'm so glad i really hope that sess buries him anyway!
Finally! Ahhh! I loved it!!!!!
-Dances- I can't wait for more!
I hope everythign turns out wonderful!
ZOMG!!!! I am sitting on the edge of my chair; the suspense has re-energized me after all the hustle and bustle of the day, for sure! And I'm probably going to speed all the way to Kalamazoo and back home to the Detroit area tomorrow JUST so I can read the next chapter!!! Okay, maybe not that much, but probably a little. I can't begin to tell you, again, how much I am enjoying this story, despite the heart-wrenching nature. Somehow, you've managed to combine just the right amount of hope, suspense, warmth, love, courage and even humor - simply AWESOME, m'dear. Again, thank you - SO VERY MUCH - for sharing your hard work with us all.
Wishing you the very best of the holidays!
:D
~~Wiccan~~
Oh wow. First off, your writing style is fantastic, as always. I love your descriptions, even though they made me want to cry. And I couldn't help but feel a little, well, vindicated I suppose, when that bastard's nose got broken, even though in real life (and this feels strangely real) I would hate the thought of something like that. Technical stuff aside, this is an amazing fic, and I think it takes a lot of strength to write something like this, especially since writers tend to put themselves into the characters shoes beyond just empathizing. Thank you for wiriting this story. Merry Christmas/Happy Holidays.
I have a feeling problems will arise from Sesshoumaru finding the father, that something will go horribly awry with it. I've had a crappy week, and this oddly made me feel better. No idea why, just did, even though I'm sniffling and generally weepy. I really can't wait for the next chapter, and I'm keeping my fingers crossed that things work out. As always, amazingly written, and I can't wait to know what happens next.
Sometimes I don't think I even have words to describe how beautiful your story is...
lashon (Chapter 5) - Thu 08 Dec 2011
this story is soo sweet :) i really wanna work at a hospital even though all the sadness and everything. i really hope shippo makes it through and i'll be waiting for the next chap
Normally I do not read stories where there are no youkai and everyone is human, but this story has touched my heart. You capture all the emotion so deeply.
Nicka (Chapter 5) - Tue 06 Dec 2011
Man I have cried and cried and cried. Well written.
Azumii (Chapter 5) - Tue 06 Dec 2011
This story ALWAYS, without fail will make me cry. It's just so sad and beautiful at the same time. I'm an emotional wreck... I need more chapters to make me better. :D
xoxox
Oh My! My heart is just breaking!! To see little Shippo so sick and Kagome trying to be so strong is very painful. However, it was a pleasure to see the rest of Sesshoumaru's family! I really loved the glimpse of the Sesshoumaru we all know and love when he made that phone call!! That jerk will not know what hit him when Sess is done with him!! Truly a fantastic story!
i dunno wheather or not to be happy orcurse, i LOVE this fic, but man every time TEARS!
TruGemini (Chapter 5) - Tue 06 Dec 2011
Oh No! Poor Shippo!! I started tearing up at my desk behind this. I'm glad Sess was there for her. And now the other family members are making an appearance. Such a wonderful, heart-warming tale. I love it truly!
I don't know how you do it, To have the strengh to write this story, I question my own strengh just reading it...here I am in tears at work...and keep praying for all the kids who actually live this life, While I am sure it may take a few more tears before we see a happy ending, I pray that God's Grace and Mercy actually bless a real life child.
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