Aww, that's awesome. I can see him using excuses to see her, instead of being honest and saying he likes her.
I like that they're dancing a bit around the issue, and I can't wait to see how he takes her 'challenge' for honesty. Great updates, and I can't wait to see what's next.
Gah! Pixie stix can't compete with that!
I admit I like that as a communication expert, Kagome seems a bit stilted in other people's company, and misses Rin. Maybe it's my love for all things awkward.
I anticipate your next update!
This is so cute! Hehe it's kinda funny how Kagome is now the one feeling socially awkward.
Cute story!
Aww, cute moment!
The last sentence seemed a bit stilted, but otherwise great update!
*sniffsniff* I smell blood in the water. The sharks will close in, and Kagome will confusicate them with her communication skills. Or if not, Sesshy will protect her.
Either way, cute update, and can't wait to read more.
I notice he said 'take' and not 'show' or 'introduce'. I'm just curious, seeing as how words are kind of a biggie in this story. (I could be chasing my own tail as well).
Anywho, can't wait for the next update!
When my friend started her psych degree, she couldn't help but diagnose us -aloud-, much to our chagrin. I can see where it would become a problem when making friends. Great update!
YES! Multiple updates since I left. All of them utterly fantastic!
I love the random turns in your story.
if Kagome thought rin was two, but she was actually 5ish looks like there's some miscommunication...lol that's funny because she's a communication therapist lol I know it was stupid, I just had to do it I'm sorry
I'm wondering on just what rin says to break the ice lol
lol Mr. Snuffles we always call our dog that, except its Mrs. Snuffles...yet shes not married hmm...
anyways there was one sentence that threw me for a loop...
"There was Kagome who looked for frazzled as she talked with his mother. "
I don't understand it.
I wonder if anything she's planning has something to do with Kagome, or if Kagome is in on the whole thing! lol
I imagine Sesshoumaru feeling vaguely hunted lol. His mother has always seemed like sort of a meddler in a way, even though she's barely seen in the series. I imagine his father was too, after the tests set up for his sons. Either way, great update, and can't wait to see what's next.
I like the subtly cute moments. And your story is phenominal, just for the details you put into it and the new concepts, plus you execute them very well. Great update and I can't wait to see more.
The concepts present in your story are fantastic, and I'm even more amazed that you manage to communcate everything so well in such short chapters. Phenomenal!
lol I had to google it last chapter XD it's confusing, to me at least, How are you supposed to fill in a box that you nor somebody else knows what goes inside? Impossible! Love how this story is working itself out!
aww, her? That's kinda sweet. What about her makes him want to compare? Finally Sesshoumaru is coming back to reality lol
OOoo! I would like to see how wrong he is too! Update!!(ya I know you just did, but it's nice when you update)
awww, I totally just love your story! Its just makes me feel good when I read it. If there was a feel-good genre this would totally fall under there. Also I love how you are using your class to write the story. It makes the story based on factual information and therefore more believable, Keep it up! It's fantastic!
Love it, and the concept is rather interesting. Can't wait to see where this is going, good luck. =)
~lily
Yes we do need more positives! I read his list and awed! It sounded so sad, it made me sad.
Grammar Mistake:
"She felt good about it- after all everyone had their faults but not many women could say they were effective communicators" *Faults, but
"His eyes were faraway and Kagome sought to bring him back to her." *faraway, and
I should've left a comment earlier since I've been following your story for a while now. Keep it up! Loved your Name drabble and I was totally tehe-ing on the 2/5 positive adjectives for self-esteem~
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