Hahahahahahaha...... I pissed my pants... TWICE .... awesome =)
This is wonderfully humorous and so entertaining, and I really like your writing style. I think I was begging Sesshoumaru not to put the collar on right alongside Kagome, and I had to laugh at the poor girl's misfortune at the end. Wrong brother indeed! 
  
      
Cathryn (Chapter 1) - Sun 16 Oct 2011 
Hilarious!!!! 
      
Ahahaha! Love it! Please update soon! :) 
  
      
This was hilarious!!! 
      
Diane (Chapter 1) - Sat 15 Oct 2011 
Liked it overall. Just as an FYI Jaken is Sesshoumaru's retainer, Sess isn't Rin's retainer. Here's the definition; An employee, typically a long-term employee. or A servant or an attendant, especially one in the household of a person of high rank. I'm not sure what you'd call Sess from Rin's POV. 
  
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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