Awwhh, i loved it ^^

 

 

".....[blahblahblah...] ...... despite his pleas to see my belly filled with his children."

At first I thought it meant that Kagome ate his children. xD

This story was so sweet! I'm glad I got to read it.

great chapter, dunno whether or not Ichiro will be important in the story though... ((thx for the description of 'tempura' now i'm hungry!!))

Wow! Sesshoumaru is PERFECT, too perfect, but any body would choose him over most guys any day. I get what you're saying. Please continue.

Hehe, your really almost exactily like my Best friend forever(litteraly foever i've know her for 8 or 9years) named Lorna! lol! Um i really like you story. About Sesshoumaru i knew something was up With the way he was acting! And i fell the same way about the wolves! Thy do give me that filling like they know what life is really about, and we humans, still have to figure it out! there almost like a wise old teacher, or buddha, or something........hehe i'm so glad im not the only one....... I never talked about that with Lorna i alwayss forgot to ask........hehe lol!

what the heck is 'tempura' ?

i would've freaked too.. seriously..

can't wait for the next chapter... update soon please.

random question:: is Chao said like 'ciao' or 'cow' ?

I like where this is going. I really do, but here's some minor criticism for you. It will make it even better. You need to watch out for the point of view. You use first person so everything has be in first person. You, most likely unintentionally, switched to third person on some parts, and became really confused. The second is you doubled typed words in some places. Sesshomaru is suppose to be perfect, but to me it seemed like somebody beat teh holy smokes out him with a cute and adorable stick!! Most of us do cast him as perfect (his name does mean killing perfection), but in the devilish charming and mature way. Not Hojo-ish. This could also stand to be a little more descriptive. What did Sesshomaru's clothing look like? What age are Sesshomaru and Kagome? Where was Grampa and Souta during all those scenes? Where was everyone placed at the table? What time did Sesshomaru arrive? How long has her mother worked at the firm and why did Chao suddenly notice her? All these little details are usual what help hold a story together and help the plot develop. I really would like to see where this is goin and I hope take my minor criticism to heart and really take this some place special.

That guy Chao is such a slimy creep,I wonder if his revenge for not getting a bigger reaction of Kagome's family knowing that Sesshomaru kissing Kagome in the kitchen,was getting to ask Souta of how Kagome stand someone who is absolutely perfect.

wow, not bad. I like this alot! (btw, orange is a very spontanious color. Maybe thats why you like it. Its always a shock to see it =P)