That was fantastically real... and the details were believable enough for a regular person like me. The emotion of Kagome's blowup at Sango were... intense.
great story
Took me long enough to get to this! PHEW!
TOOK ME EVEN LONGER TO READ Ahah, but it's no way a complaint, I LOVE long stories/oneshots! I sure got my wish with this!
This was literally - I don't even know what to say. I listened to the songs while reading. I mean you listened to them while writing, so I figured it would bring an added effect if I did the same! AND IT DID. By the end I just wanted to say "MY EMOTIONS! I DONT KNOW WHAT THEY ARE DOING!" Which is a great thing by the way.
All this to say, this was a wonderful, well thought out, and well put together story! Wonderful. Amazing. Captivating. Everything I can think of, lol.
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I made it to the end...wooh!! I really liked that Sesshoumaru did come back hurt. It seemed more realistic that after his third tour out he would get hurt somewhat. But his family is going to work it out and everything will be fine and everyone is still loved and together. I enjoyed your story and can't wait to read more of them :)
Awwww....that was just sooo Sesshomaru! Military and demanding perfection and honesty. I love him. Great job love.
Ok so, I told you this the other day in chat, but I really like this. Everything was pieced together wonderfully and the plot was well thought out and written. The dynamics of the story are great. Well done my friend!
That was really well done. I like the realistic emotions you invoked in your characters, the interactions, and the situations. :)
awe i like that! it's cute! *smiles*
I LOVED this, Sky! It was awesome. I liked the way you had it set up and the plotline in general. There's so many things running through my head right now from reading this that I don't even know what to say anymore. lol. But just know that this is definitely going into my faves and that I thought it was an amazing read. And, I thought the length was just right for a story like this.
sky!! you make summer tear up!!!! this was so sad and happy and hopeful. Awesome job once again, dear.
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