You've hooked me! I'm sorely hoping this isn't a oneshot! I'm not used to appreciating first person stories - but I truly do in this case. Please, don't leave us all hanging! Go for the gold, dear, and write, write, write! I'm curious as to why Sango hired someone to kill InuYasha, as to why Sesshomaru (seemingly) was the one to do it. Great job~!
I have a few questions....why did Sango hire Sesshoumaru to kill Inuyasha? Was Kagome with Inuyasha? There needs to be a litte more background. When I finished I was more confused than anything else. You write very well, the idea needs to be clearer.
Not really sure if I like this one-shot or not. I think you've got a good basic idea, but there's not really enough for the story to really come together. Perhaps if it was longer, or even multi-chaptered, I would have enjoyed it more. But I do like the basic storyline.
