Putting it bluntly.........you totally fucked up my head right now?? What the hell is going on here? Why is she doing that to him and why is he allowing it? Was  he taking the punishment for InuYasha or something??

Lol nice one Naq! =D good job on your first dark fic!

ok... i agree with the trainwreck analogy...this had to be one of the most disturbing things I have ever read....still a little confused as to why he would allow her to do those things to him, but hey, whatever.

I'm slightly lost but understand that it was full circle...?

Its interesting...a different take from your usual but interesting so far...

Insanity is a scary thing, isn't it?  I think I am beginning to undestand.  Please continue.

its kinda like a trainwreck in that no matter how much you want to u just cant look away. i find myself engrossed despite the fact that im confused... so keep it coming im sure i'll figure out whats going on eventually.

Ok...that explained a little, but not nearly enough... still having trouble wrapping my mind around why she is ass raping him with tree branches.

Ok...I'm not sure WHAT to think about this....except for ...why?  Why is she doing this?