Hi, there! I was re-reading this chapter, when it suddenly dawned on me that you've written it as if Inuyasha's pup will be the first grandchild for Inupapa. Yet, in earlier chapters you wrote in Rin as Sesshomaru's daughter.
("HUZZAH! THE PROPHECY HAS BEEN FULFILLED! THE SEED HAS BEEN PLANTED! BOOYAH! Though I DID hope it would be my eldest son first, but alas, where there is one, one will follow! Well done, my boy!" Inutaisho slapped his sons on the back and had a hearty laugh, his body shaking like a bowl full of jello.)
See what I mean?? Inupapa is stating he hoped Sesshomaru would be the first to give him a grandchild. So, yeah, just a little confusing. Thought I should point this out, in case no one else noticed it.
Anyhoo, great story. Glad you updated, and hope you update again soon! :D
Wow. I was pleasently surprised! You have an amazing story, and im trilled i found it.
Good luck, hope to read more.
-polishes knife as she reads the end of the chapter-
I liked this chapter~ I did, indeed.
-points knife-
And I am SO glad you decided to update more frequently...
-evil grin-
