This is completely juicy! But what an A****** for not checking it out further, but if he did i guess we wouldn't have a story lol. I wish there were like 20 chapters uploaded, I am hooked and can't wait for another!!
Jay_chAn (Chapter 4) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
My eyes got misty lol... I still can't believe Sango would do that, and Sesshomaru believed her.
I can't wait for little Kazuki to join in! And will Kagome and Sesshomaru meet again soon?
I can't wait for your next update!!!!
Jen (Chapter 4) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
Wow, I have to say that this all could have gone a lot better if everyone would have just talked to one another instead of making assumptions. I can't say I agree with Touga's actions and self-righteousness. He allowed this to go on for two years and told his son absolutely nothing. Sesshomaru was never given the chance to make things right, and two years may now be too late. If Touga wanted to do the right thing, he should have been in his son's face during the pregnancy, not taking the passive-agressive action of handing him papers to terminate his rights as a parent to a child that was born two years ago.
sara (Chapter 4) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
This is so addiciting! Poor, poor Sesshoumaru. Your stupidity is astounding.
Oh my - this is FANTASTIC! Such incredible drama and you almost have to feel sorry for Sesshomaru for being such a bloody fool....I figure he's going to try get get back in her good graces but she's not going to be very forgiving. I can honestly say that I wouldn't blame her.
I love that you're using Izayoi and Toga in this story - I enjoy it when writers have the full family aspect and their interaction.
Great stuff and glad to see you're still writing since the completion of Misconceptions.
OOOOhhhhhh! Now what is Sess gonna do? Is Sango going to try to get rid of the pup? Will Kagome find out what Sango has done? Sess is going to be in for some hard and long work to get in Kag's good graces.
darknessqueen0789 (Chapter 4) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
Wow I feel sad for all three of them. I am very impressed with Touga on showing Sesshomaru thoes papers. Hopefully this will make him go and get his son and the mother of his child out of that horrible situation. Another great chapter! I'm sitting at the edge of my seat for the next chapter!
Chrissie (Chapter 1) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
I like the story and hope that Kagome lets Sesshomaru explain and Sango gets whats coming to her... But really, I wish that Sesshomaru wasn't always the bad guy in it... and why on earth didn't Touga talk to his son a long time ago about this... and why would he be seeing his grandson and not saying why aren't you bothering with him and such. I just don't understand that.
If Touga had come forth to sesshomaru when she was pregnant or right after his birth, being a demon he would have been able to have scented that the child was his. I hope that this can get fixed and that Sesshomaru and Kagome make it up to eachother.
Yudelle (Chapter 4) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
I...LOVE IT! Oh my goodness, this story is not only addicting but it is also very good. I now have a new guilty pleasure >.< I am also happy that you decided to write a new fanfic, I have read "Misconceptions and Misunderstandings," which is not only one of my favorites, but I also loved every chapter I read. Keep up the awesome job.
O_O SERIOUSLY SANGO NEEDS TO BE BEATEN BLACK AND BLOODY FOR WHAT SHE'S DONE THAT TW@T! i really really REALLY HATE HER RIGHT NOW!!!
Fair Oma (Chapter 4) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
u again have hit the mark what a wonderful story. after your last one end i cry (it's over and i have nothing to look forward too) i was wrong in a big way. the guilt and i hope u make himfeel it well. And Sango what a witch i mean really again i would watch out for the revenge from Sess for this and problemly other tricks
Chaotic.Lover (Chapter 4) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
Finally! The truth!! Sess is really....Can't believe that he trusted Sango on that matter!!! I mean isn't he all intelligent and so?..I guess that's only on business....What fools we are when in love. XD
I hope Sess will be able to explain to Kag and tell her of his feeling!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Please update soon^^
I am loving this...please continue!
Ashley (Chapter 3) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
You can't stop it here...that is so evil...
sara (Chapter 3) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
That bitch! That miserable, narrow-minded bitch! How can she call herself bestfriend of Kagome when she ruined her life and deprived an innocent child of his father? And Sesshoumaru! How could he just believe her, doesn´t he have any faith in Kagome to trust that bitch just because she claims to be her friend? Did he just not ask Kagome what was going on and to tell him the truth? Man, so much hurt just because they didn´t communicate with each other.
i'ma follow here, but OMFG still hate sango i REALLY REALLY hope that she gets the worst end ever >:l freakign twatfacesango!
Patricia (Chapter 3) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
I love this story! this is one of my new favs that i will be looking out for updates!
I would like to see more flashback about how kag and sess got together, and when they were dating so forth.
Why would Sango break them up!?
now that sess knows about his son wonder what hes going to do? i hope sota can still get a good job and are excited to see how you go about sess and kag getting back together. I hope its not just him denying her for the longest and can find out the truth soon.
Good work! updates please!
OMG!!! So it was Sango that did this??!! I cannot believe she would stoop that far. No wonder she keeps trying to press a human boy on Kagome. She either has something against demons, or she wants Sess for herself.
joyouki (Chapter 3) - Tue 05 Jul 2011
OMG scream!!! I can't believe Sango is the one who did this!!! love the story!!
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