LOL! Fighting like an old married couple..
Sorry for the late review! I've been gone in Alaska for the past week or so... Anyways, this chapter was lovely! Funny, sweet, and entertaining all at once!
Please update soon! This story is one of my all time favorites, your writing is superb and your plots are to die for. I've always been curious as to how you write with such cohesiveness and proper grammar while still inspiring many, many laughs.
Also I feel I should let you know that with all my favorites I have a tendency to read my favorite lines aloud, obviously with your work I read most of the page aloud. This aloudness led to an unfortunete incident in which my mother walked in on my reading of the "bitchy" bra scene and heard my incredibly annoying choke-laughter.
My mother shares my view as to how an authoress as fantastic as yourself should not be able to exist and because of this supposed nonexistence paired with my choke-die-laugh, I am now a member of the Dokuga Asylum for the Criminally Insane, don't ask about the criminal part, not if you want to sleep anyways.
I chose to blame you for my commitment and as such I now plead for you to put up a new chapter so I can prove my sanity. Well, maybe not sanity, but atleast that you exist. Again please update soon as typing with your nose is difficult and my straight jacket has a curious stain on the shoulder that I'm scared may bite me.
Love and luck,
BB
Oh I can't stop laughing at the hiliarity of these two. I wonder how the week is going to go for Kagome? Will she have her hands full or will Dokuga be the perfect guest??? JEN
LOL! Obviously he doesn't know who he's dealing with. Payback is a monster and it's coming for Sess when he returns!
Katelynn (Chapter 17) - Tue 26 Jul 2011
i love it!!!! XD please update soon :)
Boy, he may have a dog when he returns, but I'm not sure about his apartment...
As my late husband used to love to say, just saying 'behave' does not designate good or bad behavior. :winks: One could always behave BADLY. *giggles*
Thanks for writing!
Ashes (Chapter 16) - Mon 25 Jul 2011
HA! I've been there. You forgot the 'what the hell's and 'holy crap's that accompanied the flight from the other.
Poor Dokuga. I'm really enjoying this story.
Oh, that chapter was just precious! Thank you for writing! I look forward to more!
LOL. Hahahaha. Nice one---> I didn’t pay you to kill her. and the part where kagome said :"That was magic, I swear". LOL, it almost seemed like she was going to idolise sesshoumaru. The last bit where they bickered like an old couple, awww. that was kind of sweet :)
hehheh. can't wait to see how kagome is going to take care of dokuga and of course, the chances of having showdowns between dokuga and buyo. hohoho!
cakeiton (Chapter 16) - Sun 24 Jul 2011
i really really really liked this chapter! gj! glad its back
LOL!! Those two left poor Dokuga. They know you tease the one you want.
LOL that was fabulous! Don't they bicker like an old couple? I have say they do. I'm starting to see a pattern with this relationship.
I'm just wondering when the 'kinda like' kicks in....
The dog gets it right every time :)
Oh, and glad to have you back!!!!
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