when are going to finish this story?

This story is really entertaining ^__^  You're really good with the sharp-witted rejoinders and keen behavioral insights into the characters.  I also appreciate that you're writing Kagome with a fair amount of sass, confidence and intelligence.  I've been reading a lot of stories lately where's she's ultra demure, so this is a nice change of pace (not to belittle the other stories.  they're very good too.)  I think this story is coming along nicely and I can't wait to see how things unfold.  You have a unique style so keep up the good work! 

PS, this is by far my favorite quote from the story thus far:

"Yeah yeah, I’m going! Don’t get your boa in a bunch your majesty."

Hehe, nice.  ^__^ d

Whoops. I'm sorry I meant this chapter. Chapter 5 should be in past tense.

You have a great sense of humor :)  I'm really enjoying the story so far.  I think you may want to edit this chapter a bit, though.  Having it in present tense instead of past tense doesn't match the rest of your chanpters and makes it feel a little stilted.  If you changed it to past tense, it would flow a lot better.  Just a suggestion :)  Keep up the good work!

xDD Manipulative schtick! <3

Aww, Miroku, you can be so wise. ;u; I'm working through this, I love your interactions of their group, Kagome's sarcasm and cynicism is absolutely brilliant. xDD

I think there is more to this scam with Sesshoumaru !

score one for Kagome its about time she started raking in the points!!!!

Oh, I love it! Kagome is very clever, Sesshoumaru didn't expect this. haha! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

"Don’t get your boa in a bunch your majesty." lol No matter how many times I read it, I laugh every time. haha...

I liked the conversation between Kagome and Inuyasha. I expected to read the usual cliches, but it's fresh and original, and still in the style of "Inuyasha". 

Nice chapter. I wonder what's next :)

Great Chapter!

Yes, Sesshoumaru, Kagome is very responsible human being, magnet for troubles, yes, but responsible magnet.

I liked that she perplexed him, that way he could look at her without prejudice. And he found that she can be mature and interesting person.

Now I’m dying to know what for he needs her. :) Please, continue.

Mr. Tall, Pale & Brooding - OMG that is frickin' hysterical!  That is just too awesome - love the chapter and the entire story for that matter!  Keep on writing and hope you have another update soon!

Oh, now kagome is reasonable, it only took a “raw, ferrous power of his irritated youki”

And what?! Kagome was caught by Sesshy`s words «Kagome .... Is a human whose life holds merit. It would be a waste for her to perish»! And now she`s bound?! Because stupid Inuyasha doesn`t know how to say thanks? Oh, Seshoumaru had it all thought out.
Poor Kagome is probably now thinking that ogre was nice.

This was unexpected, very inventive. I liked it.

Wow! They are already quarreling like a long married couple! Funny. I wonder who will win.
Oh, by the way, you changed the title? Good one. It’s better suited to the story.

Poor girl Kagome went through the dark forest to a meeting with the predator. And he did not disappoint her, demanded a recompense for the rescue. Now, who does that?! Yes, Inuyasha was right all along. But Miroku was right too or not? Can Kagome protect herself against Sesshoumaru, in case he will not tolerate her refusal? O-ho-ho, it`s all so intriguing. I believe everything is just started.

I was impressed by description of how she felt, not just saw Sesshoumaru in the dark forest. Very graphic and original.

Yes, the ogres, and then a wild and ill-disciplined Inu and now the demanding Lord. A typical day in Kagome`s life. :)

Sesshomaru want to speak to her...? Alone?! How intriguing! I will patiently wait for next chapter :)

 Thank you for so many chapters at once

Love the old gangster speel...see?  Nice to know it is NOT a dying art form.  Your story is proving to be quite entertaining.  Thank you and keep up the good storyline!

Wow, another chapter! Nice)

“Things will start to pick up soon!” Oh, I can`t wait!

Yes, Inuyasha, you should thank Seshomaru! Now! Lol! And what`s on Seshomaru`s mind, now I want to know “why” too...

Very good chapter, I will continue to read your story definitely