Aghhhhh! So good. It was a very unique idea, the plot didn't feel rushed, and the writing was very well done. I can't wait for a sequel!
That was cute!
I can see how it could work to end it there. However... I would love to see their relationship fully develop as well.
Thanks so much for writing!
Fantastic story!! It was orginal and humorous. Looking forward to the sequel.
Cathryn (Chapter 21) - Thu 24 Nov 2011
Sequal Sequal Sequal!!! loved it!
Oh, please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please make a sequal!!!!!! This was amazing!!!!!
I loved this story. So by all means, please do a sequel. After all, my favorite part of Sess/Kag stories is the romance. So let's have some. You've given him a wonderful start down that road. I look forward to the rest of the journey.
me (Chapter 21) - Tue 22 Nov 2011
WRITE MORE!!!
Avidreader (Chapter 21) - Tue 22 Nov 2011
Might...? do a sequel...? Oh please, please, please do a sequel! I liked this story - a LOT!
Argh, cliffhanger!!! You're delightfully evil, you know that? I wasn't expecting that to happen, but it's really exciting! Hmm...I hope the story isn't too close to being over. I would like to see how their relationship plays out, now that Sesshy is back to normal, hehe ^_^
I can't wait for the the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
:bursts out laughing: That's AWESOME! Popcorn Sesshomaru with aerial lightshow change! Booyaka!
now... when is Kagome going to Sit Inuyasha for a poorly planned Wind Scar?
Thanks for writing!
oh noes! At least he's himself again. Update soon, please!
Great chapter. I loved the whole "Alpha Male" contest between Sess and Inuyasha, too funny.
bwahaha!! Loved the inu-chat! Too awesome!
And of course Inuyasha doesn't stop to wonder why a 'typical' canine knows Kagome's a miko. Or maybe they Can know things like that? :contemplative:
Thanks for writing!
lashon (Chapter 18) - Sat 08 Oct 2011
this is soo cute!!
I'd say it would be funny if Sesshomaru bit Inuyasha on his heinie... but I wouldn't want him to be subjected to putting his jaws anywhere Near there. ^_^
Thanks for writing!
So excited to see the update! I really liked this chapter and can't wait for the next.
I wonder if Inuyasha will get jealous of Mr. Fluffy? LOL
Hi I wanted to say that I like your story so far! :) I did notice one thing that I wanted to bring to your attention - there appears to be a conflict with your story's plot at the beginning. Miroku and Sango were supposed to go back to Kaede's village and relieve Kagome of their children (Kagome was supposed to be watching their kids as well while they were killing demons for money). Thus, Sesshoumaru would be able to follow Kirara to the village to find Kagome. However, the next part of it you had Sesshoumaru making it to the village without the help of Kirara and Miroku and Sango's kids weren't there. So, then you had Kagome, with Sesshoumaru as her companion, go to Sango and Miroku instead. I think I explained that right! I just wanted you to be aware of the plot conflict! It's not a big deal, but I know it's something I worry about doing! I love the story and I look forward to reading more! Happy writing! :) Ja ne! -Tsuki
So exciting! Maybe they will be able to break the curse soon.
Sora (Chapter 16) - Thu 15 Sep 2011
I like this chapter very much. It’s so nice in the beginning where Kagome reflected her feelings for Sesshoumaru. And it looked so real.
I think Sesshoumaru`s behavior in this chapter is so cute and funny, although real and understandable. I mean the picture of cute fluffy puppy trying to act like Sesshoumaru is hilarious. The arrogant cute puppy nodded looking annoyed. lol. Good job!
Sesshoumaru, go fetch Jaken! lol
:giggles: I doubt Sesshomaru appreciates how cute it was that he fetched poor Jaken.
Thanks for writing!
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