Do you realize that you used "Tekuya" and "Tekeyu" to refer to the same character in this chapter?

"stay her" should be "stay here"

"furry" in the first line should be "fury"

Three bits of advice: a.) "His taught chest" should actually be "His taut chest;" b.) One cannot "drip of" anything hence I would suggest a phrase/word change; and c.) In the (second to) last paragraph, I would chill out on the use of the word "beautiful." While repetition does emphasize the extent of something, over-repetition makes it seem like you have an unimaginative vocabulary. I think you can definitely get rid of the usage after handsome. It just seems redundant in that situation and would, perhaps, put a great deal to alleviating your over-repetition. Otherwise, interesting beginning. I'm very curious as to what happens next. ~SA

Your story rocks and i think you are a professional at this. keep up the good work and please update sooner! :-)

YAY!! YAY!! YAY!! Please, don't ever leave me again!!! Update soon cause I am loving this fic.

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Love the story, I read it when you frist updated it, so I'm leaving reviews now, please update soon.

Happy Dance!!! You updated! Very glad to see you back. This chapter was so emotional. Poor Kagome, I feel sorry for her cause Sesshoumaru is so confusing. I'm glad to see that his mother was at least able to get through to him a little and maybe now he will try to get a little closer to Kagome instead of pushing her away. Awesome update. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

YAYYYY!!! This definitely just made my day.  Sesshomaru is so hot and cold- if I was Kagome I'd punch him ;)  It's so great to see you updating this!  One of my favorite fics :)

Hello!!

OMG What a great fic!! I cannot believe this when I first started to read this. WOW what a different take on youkai extermination. 

Now my question would be about Sesshomaru. Inuyoukai are very affectionate towards their mates, but as Kagome stated she had not seen him since her introduction to Haru which was 3 weeks ago. Wouldn't that drive Sesshomaru crazy?? Wouldn't his instincts by now would be to ensure that they are together as much as possible or to show her sometype of affection??

The other bound-taiyoukai admitted that affection does take route, Kikyo admitted she stayed away from her mate for 1 month, it is nearing that amount of time and Tekeyu (dragon youkai) was driven nearly mad by his beast, isn't it safe to say that Sesshomaru would be going mad by now? Or does this just show how powerful Sesshomaru can be because he is away from his mate for that amount of time? In the begining he seemed to let his instincts take control when Kagome was nearly raped, was this due to him finally being released?

Now Kimikyo is more jealous of Kagomes relationship with Haru/Inuyasha, where as Sesshomaru is not?? Seems unlikely or is he oblivous to what is happening. 

Wonder what it would be like if Sukimi left Naraku to seek refuge within the Western Caverns with Sesshomaru and everyone there. Would Sesshomaru show that he cared for her more than Kagome?? Would the other youkai be more hostile towards Kagome feeling as if Sukimi was Sesshomaru's rightful mate and not her? Would Kagome even fight for Sesshomaru (being as she is not longer fully human)??

I have read "Of Slaugher and Salvation" and this was also a good fic as well. I truly hope you will continue with this fc soon as I am most excited to read what becomes of everyone next. 

Keep up the great work.

-Kira

please update soon...

COME BACK AND STOP NEGLECTING THIS STORY, PLEEEEASE!!! IT'S SOOOO GREAT!

Another great chapter! Wonder if Sesshoumaru will start to get jealous of the attention that Kags is getting from Inuyasha and Haru? It looks like Sessmom doesn't like it very much.

Hhhmmm very interesting, it looks like Sukimi might have had something to do with Sess getting bound. Poor Sesshoumaru sounds so confused right now. Torn between the feelings he still has for Sukimi and the instinctual ones for Kagome brought on by being bound to her.

Thanks for another great read and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Another beatiful chapter dear! I have so fallen in love with thiss tory. Please update once you are feeling better.

Ohh wow! This is truly an amazing fic! I don't believe anyone has come up with this kind of concept before.

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Now Kimikyo is in a sense "demanding" a ceremonial mating between Sesshomaru and Kagome. Will this ceremony require him to mark her in the traditional way? As we've seen Kimikyo is very much a stickler for tradition (where Sesshomaru dislikes it.)

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Sukimi was Sesshomaru’s intended mate correct? Now was this due to them being in an arranged mating or was it because they fell in love with each other, maybe it could’ve been a mutual agreement between friends? So far Sesshomaru has not questioned his mother or anyone else to see if she still lives (not that it will be a great thing to hear that she helped Naraku bind and control him).

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In the western caverns there are only youkai but will some of them be hostile towards Kagome feeling as since she is both “human” and “Sesshomaru’s bound miko” she is partially to blame for the situation they are currently in?

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I’ve never really like fics to where Kagome is made to be extremely hot headed and reckless, so I thank you for her demeanor being far from that. We all know she can have a temper to her but it is not all the time as most people like to depict her as.

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Over all great work so far, I also enjoy reading your other fic Slaughter and Salvation but for some reason whenever  I’m on Dokuga I just have to re-read Bound truly one of my favorite fics.

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Side note: maybe you should try some type of scene separator as I know for others sometimes myself that I get momentarily confused the way it jumps from one scene to another without something to differentiate it from the last.

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Keep up the great work on both fics…cannot wait to see what happens next on Bound (you’ve already updated Of Slaughter and Salvation)

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Best,

Kimi

aweeeeeee i loved the end of that chapter totally made me cry!!!! -tear- great story keep up the great work u rock!

Wow wast expecting the whole kikyo inuyahsa thing, i assumed they didnt have a connection in this story. But i like how everything ties in to the story line. Time for badass SESSHOMARU wOOt WooT!!!! xD

Im a bit confused....so are all demons bound??? By Naraku??? I hope that demi god rips him apart....(:<

I always found kagomes temper amusing. 

YES!!!!!! 

I was just so relieved that it didnt happen. I almost was afraid to read this chapter.

Immediately i knew it was inuyasha...so cocky and the description of the sword helped. 

Cant wait to see were things go from here......

Oh no the dreaded part has come...thats just to cruel to make him watch. D:<