Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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JeniNeji (Chapter 122) - Sat 10 Sep 2011

This is so sad... but the story is amazing the way it is, so, I dont mind at all =]


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 122) - Sat 10 Sep 2011

So Inuyasha finally sees the truth? About damn time. Hopefully, he'll be able to get the big 'spider' off his back soon. Can't wait to read more.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 122) - Sat 10 Sep 2011

*flops over on side* more please! @_@ and there inupapa has it, the spoils of his absence. I rather like that.


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 120) - Mon 05 Sep 2011

"All sorts of evil?" O_O No kidding! O_O

Wow... can't wait to see what sorts of lessons HE'LL be teaching Inuyasha. O_O Just... wow. Certainly won't be taught as KINDLY as those from Izayoi, that's for sure. :coughs 'understatement of the year' coughs:

Thanks for writing!


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 119) - Mon 05 Sep 2011

Aww. A spectacular dinner ruined by Sess-mom. :pouts: Her timing is horrendous for happily-minded people.

Hm... I wonder about what Kagome was laughing. :giggles: It had to be good to put her in such a state!

Forgot to put my two cents about chapter lengths in my FF dot net review. :sheepish: Anyway... I tend to prefer longer chapters for the most part. However, I would rather there BE a new chapter than for a writer to feel obligated to write more than they feel comfortable. In other words, write what fits for you for any given chapter. ^_^

Thanks for writing!


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 118) - Mon 05 Sep 2011

I adore Yoko already! She's just what Kagome needs there. And I love her view on Sesshomaru. ;)

Thanks for writing!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 120) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

Girly girl. You have made my day! Three chappies with Sesshmom coming and Inuyasha learning love lessons from NARAKU of all people? Oooh, I can't wait.


JeniNeji (Chapter 120) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

Hm, Naraku certainly is a nice choice. I am very curious about how things are going to turn now.


JeniNeji (Chapter 119) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

lol Uh oh, Mom! So nice of you to send a message xD


JeniNeji (Chapter 118) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

:) Yoko is so nice


randomfan17 (Chapter 120) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

I like Yoko, she seems cool. Oh no, do i want to stick around for the fallout of a visit from Sesshomaru's mama or just come back later after destruction has stopped? Naraku, nooooooooo! No good, no good! Send his ass back to the pit in hell he crawled out of! Don't listen Inu, put your fingers in your ears and whistle Yankie Doodle till he goes away. Be a good boy and don't listen to him please! I loved the last three chapter, brightened my day.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 120) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

it WAS r0o! :3 hahahaha hanyou to hanyou!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 119) - Sun 04 Sep 2011


*cackles* MOTHER!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 118) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

0o0o0o0o


Kimberly (Chapter 1) - Fri 02 Sep 2011

I wish my reviews would show up on your page but I think something is wrong with my computer. I really love your story. The chapters are teasing me! When they are posted I want to scream because I want to read more, lol. I love the intricacies you put in the story, the small subtle things that make it so good. I can’t believe how full you can make the story when it’s only like 400 words more or less. It’s amazing!


Kimberly (Chapter 117) - Fri 02 Sep 2011

Kitsune Diva (Chapter 117) - Sat 20 Aug 2011

I am so very in love with your story, so much so that I do not mind the brevity of the chapters. The detail that is paid to the motives of your characters is amazing. I shall be ever impatient for more of your addictive chapters.


JeniNeji (Chapter 117) - Fri 19 Aug 2011

Nice going Kagome! :Cheers:


JeniNeji (Chapter 116) - Fri 19 Aug 2011

Oh, Shippo is so adorable XD


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 117) - Fri 19 Aug 2011

D: TEASE! MORE! *wiggles update bribery c0okies at you!


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