So much action!! If I were Kagome I would so have been bragging to that bitch Sekuya about how good Sess was, maybe it's a good thing I'm not though because I'm sure it would have only made her that much more crazy. I can't wait to see Sekuya meet the end she so deserves.
Looks like Kagome may get to see Sesshoumaru sooner than she had expected. I just hope that she will be able to once again subdue Nanashi.
No tears this time, but I still can't believe that you killed Josuke :( I'm looking forward to the next chapter and am very excited that it won't be a long wait!
Thanks again for another great chapter!
Smortz (Chapter 16) - Tue 26 Jul 2011
:O I came across this story today, and I had to read it all. I switched from reading it on my Kindle, to my phone, and now my laptop! IT IS SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!! I can't believe you've been hiding this from me. :3
Now get to work on the challenge prompt... ` 3 ` ....
^_~
~Smo
OMG!! Crying! This chapter was so sad! I love that dragon and I hate that he had to die. I really love the growing relationship between Sesshoumaru and Kagome, with every passing trial they become closer. I'm a bit worried about Naraku though and that bitch I hope they fail at whatever plan they've thought up! I can't wait for more you're incredible storyteller!!
oh you evil thing! to leave it off there!! Will Kagome have to battle Naraku alone? Will Josuke survive? Was that really inu no taisho???? ARG!!! I have to know! Update soon!! ^_^ love love love
Damn you Caleesci!! You made me cry again :) I mean that in the best possible way! Rest assured that your work is really doing what it is supposed to do.
I can't believe you killed Josuke! I was holding out hoping that he wouldn't die.
Now it looks like they will have to deal with Naraku and that bitch Sekuya. Bet she's gonna be pissed when she finds out that Sess and Kagome have gotten closer. Poor Kagome, Sess looks like he's on the verge of being taken over by the god again, her ankle is broken and she's going to have to face Naraku. Maybe Sess's possesion will work in thier favor this time.
Thanks for another great chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one.
Lily (Chapter 16) - Mon 25 Jul 2011
Ooooh, that Sekuya bitch is there. The little idiot, as if someone like her would ever be able to get Sessh, or beat Kagome. She'll purify her to smithereens. And Naraku, may he burn in the deepest depths of hell, along with the afore-mentioned bithch.
I love the story, pity that Josuke had to die, I quite liked him. And the Inu no Taisho goming for him in the end sooooo made me melt.
~lily
Bwahahaha rest assured! You're not the only one squealing in excitement! My family is seriously worried about my sanity ;P Whenever I see you updated story I do SCARY things XD btw some would think your fiance would be happy lol, happy girl means great.................................................................... relationship!
Oh no! Josuke, I started liking you! T^T I hope he accidentally stumbles into the arms of very skilled and beautiful demon healer :> And that he will make many cute lil' dragons with said healer LOL XD No, seriously: I don't want poor Josu-Josu to end like that ;P oh gosh but I hope Kimikyo isn't the one to save him I want love story! ^-^
There wasn't much SessKag in this chapter (sadly *sniff sniff*), but I'm eagerly waiting for Sesshou to confess his feelings! *it must happen someday... in the uhum, faraway future...* Niaf! <evil_laugh> If Of S&S was mine, I would humiliate him THOROUGHLY if you know what i mean :3 Lol I'm such a freak ^^
As always, I'm waitig forward for the next chapter!
PS You could always update Bound...I swear I can't wait!!!
Blast i made it to the end....I was thoroughly enjoying myself. =D
Sesshomaru is awesome!!!!! I mean come on practicaly still a baby and he overpowered that son of a bEtch god...
I hope cat girl and Naraku kill each other off.... -_-
Till next chapter <3
Wow i was expecting all these explicit scenes till later on...not that I mind .....hurr hurr xD
That seen was oh so very hott...had me blushing madly. Very satisfied though. >:D
This chapter was quite sad...the whole time i was reading the slaughter scene my eyes were glistening with unshead tears. Especially at the part where sesshomaru picked up the little hanyou child his grief was so palpable.
You spoil me with all these bathing scenes...XD Oh GAWD first KISS together!!!!!!!!!!!
Intense chapter I really wast expecting for Nanashi to surface, it caught me quite of gaurd...Im in love with that dragon!!!! Plesantlu surprised to find he had a humanoid form.
This chapter was magnificent, it made my heart thump with glee. <3
I loved all there moments together, the witty back in forth conversation, couldn't help but smile. :)
Him sniffing her made me go giddy.
The last scene...it was so wonderful, i couldn't help but think it was so beautifully breathtaking...
Oh how i've been missing out....I loved the "ur a gonner" comment. I love all these majestic like creatures u put into ur story the dragon im in love with but that mare at the end...I want it xD. I love the role uv givin Sessh mommy. <3
I was so mad that I dint finish this chapter last time I was reading. x( Well Anyways this was an interesting new development :). Unexpected but pleasantly welcomed. I love bathing scenes xP hehehehe....
Nykita (Chapter 15) - Sun 17 Jul 2011
That cat is a vile creature. I hope Naraku will double cross her.
Sweet interaction between Sess and kagome.
Keep up the good work :)
Nykita (Chapter 14) - Sun 17 Jul 2011
hihi lemon. And a nice hot one.
I almost like Josuke better than Sess. I just love sexy dragons.
love this story!! and there's no way kagome can kill sesshomaru, you can already see her falling! lol ^_^ update soon!
Wow another chapter so soon!!! I feel so spoiled :)
So that horrible Sekuya is going to team up with Naraku. Haha she is such a fool. He will probably give her what she deserves!
Poor Sess, he has had such a hard life. Not only living with the pain of what that monster has made him do, but also the pain of having his mother's rejection. I know he has grown to accept what his mother tried to do, but still he must have felt so alone! You did a great job writing this, I felt so bad for Sess that I cried! At least now he has Kagome and maybe she will help him get rid of the god and finally be able to start healing.
NOOO what did Kimikyo mean by "you will pick up where I left off" She can't kill him!
Thanks for another chapter and I am looking forward to the next!
OMG how i looove short chapters! :) *you have my approval so you can post another one tommorow :3* Bwahahaha <evil_laugh>
You're doing GREAT job! Exuse me for a minute I need to stop this stupid nosebleed... Got a lil' bit too excited :P
Ok, done. Sekuya is such a wicked girl, yay! ^^ Some ppl really do like lying to themselves...
Do you know why I love you?(ok, don't freak out, I mean I love your story :)) You just took plot of Inuyasha, gods, added some new characters and yet your story isn't a mess *.* Some(like..hm..me?) would expect it's difficult to write about everything without making aforementioned mess, but you just... do it and that's wonderful *.*
OOH NOOO! I don't want Kags to kill Maru! T^T Nooo, they loove each other! >.< *sniff sniff* They're supposed to have a bunch of kids and live happily ever after!
Niaff niaff(what the hell does that mean? o.O LACK OF SLEEP for sure...) can't wait to see the next chapter... Bwahaha see ya TOMMOROW *wicked smile; I think I have Sekuya's soul in me ]:-> Hm, that would certainly explain why I'm soo Sesshou-obsessed *
PS Pls don't mind me being pushy. As I already stated before - I'm ADDICTED and I just can't get enough :>
Hi Caleesci,
amazing two chapters that you have giften us, your faithful readers, with. I had a very good time reading the second one. Poor Sesshoumaru, he must be going through so much, yet he finds love in his troubled heart. I just hope Sekuya will be send to hell, that b.... . Well, no swearing right? Either way, amazing!. I love the way you wrote the erotic part of the story. One can only hope that Kagome's influence will help the poor demon to understand that one is not always responsible for his actions. Demon or not, he can't control a god!!! I am glad you threw Kagome in for the equation. She will be good for the stiff demon lord.
Ja ne,
Angel
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