Whew! Haven't checked in for awhile so I had a lot of catching up to do. EP, you leave... not clffies, but droolies! OMG I'm dying for the next update. *wipes slobber away* Kick-ass job as usual. Keep up the good work!
Ah, exquisite indeed, like this chapter. I like the sensuous undertones of your writing, it's very subtle but carries you away like no other.
Ah, Sess is smart. I think it's a good move from him to change a little his agressive approach. I just hope the Lady won't think she's not desired anymore. We all know that Kagome has issues with her self confidence, like all women. I'm eager to read more from you. XD Dewa mata
Ashes (Chapter 13) - Wed 02 Jul 2008
I like this story very much. It ebbs and flows in a peaceful manner, everything just fits. Being able to read something so well put together and so elegant is quite a treat after my usual day. Thanks for taking the time and effort to write this. Well wishes and thanks.
Ahhhh...loved it all, every word. The progression of Sess and Kag's romance, sprinkled with that of Miroku and Sango was a lovely touch. The slow contrasted with the quick--both enjoyable for what they offer.
Tana-san (Chapter 13) - Tue 01 Jul 2008
Extremely intense and romantic. One can just feel the sexual undertones. Good to finally know a bit of Sango's hangup. Don't think I would have chosen to hit the guy over the head with a pan though, especially when she saw him wrapping his ribs in bandages. There are other ways to get the point across without trying to give him a concussion or fractured skull on top of the injuries he's already sustained. Still, he allowed her to stay, so he's more forgiving a person than she. I also hope Sesshoumaru gets a clue about the modern day women being referred to as a concubine BEFORE he tells her how "honored" she should be. What a fallout that would make. Oh, no, you aren't going there are you??? I truly feel for Sesshoumaru if that happens. Hugs, JEN
Akay (Chapter 13) - Tue 01 Jul 2008
I'm not one for rollercoasters, but I do like to watch them and at the moment that is exactly what Miroku and Sango are. One big EXTREME rollercoaster. They up. They down. The loop the loop and repeat the process. Man I was about ready to scream at Sango myself. She was driving me nuts. I mean she went to his residence for goodness sakes and have the nerve to be hot and cold!?!? *pant pant - deep breath* Ok that's the end of that rant. The Kagome/Sesshoumaru moments were cute/funny. What is Inuyasha up to? Update soon- or next week - however this schedule is.
Akay (Chapter 12) - Tue 24 Jun 2008
What is the deal with Sango? At some points I like her character and at other points I'm like "What the hell is her damage?!" Oh well, I am enjoying the story still. Sango and Miroku... confusing sometimes, but I'm sure it will make sense soon. Kagome and Sesshoumaru - funny as hell.
Tana-san (Chapter 12) - Tue 24 Jun 2008
Nah, I wouldn't get mad or hurt you for leaving it just as it starts getting good because I know you and you can't wait to write more to entise us with. This is the tool of a true action and romance writer...keep them coming back for more...Just be sure not to take too long in updating because I said I wouldn't get mad, I can't speak for the other reviewers. I liked Kagome's thoughtfulness to aid his discomfort, but no, cold is NOT helpful in a case such as this. And what's with Sango? She's a disaster waiting to happen. I'd send her on her way. She gives off too many negative vibes for me. I do like Miroku as Sesshoumaru's personal assistant (and conscience) though. It's not too far from his OC. I'm almost caught up on TSNNAM and then I'll go to the rest I've missed. I so do enjoy these times when I can be left alone with my fanfics. Hugs, Jen
I love Sango's surly attitude toward Miroku.
Mmmmm...How Delicious, M'dear?
Yes, I know I reveiwed already on FF but I had to leave one here too!
(Yes I've been writing today! Nag nag nag;)
Still a great chapter, My dear ElegantPaws!
Hugs,
Safire
(Who is being dragged off to her writing)
zackire (Chapter 12) - Sun 22 Jun 2008
what is ur prob? you have pulled the cliffhangy thing on me not once, not twice.. but more than 3!
are u trying to mk me nuts, waiting?? hehehe..
Tana-san (Chapter 11) - Mon 16 Jun 2008
Absolutely exquisite, my dear friend. You are so blessed to have such descriptive skills. From the beginning of this fic you have put me right there at the scene. I'm seeing every detail so clearly. You also have the gift for sensuality. You leave me wishing it were me that was being kissed. I loved the whole bathroom scene. She just literally walked right into that one and what a treat. I gather he thinks Kagome cannot see his true features? The descriptions of the clothing is also wonderful. You have very good taste in fashion. You would dress any man proud. I may not know the designers you speak of but the styles and details are fantastic. I loved Kagome's dress, so beautiful and wouldn't you buy the dress too(if you could afford to) if someone told you you couldn't pull it off? Oh and Sesshoumaru so deserves that swift kick in the jewels thinking he can minipulate a woman, especially one like Kagome, in this day and age. Hasn't he learned anything about women over the years? But then again too, I've known a few men that thought they ere all that and any woman would be lucky to have them. Can't wait to see this played out. Sorry it's taking me so long in reading. I've been in our new home for alittle over a month now and what happens? I ended up needing to have a nerve conduction test done on my arms, hands and neck because they were going severely and painfully numb. That test put me into a severe crisis of the fibromyalgia and nothing was helping me to relieve the pain or stop me from going numb down my whole right side. It's taken 3 weeks to work it's way to a bearable tolerance but at least now maybe I can get some reading done. Oh, the test showed no nerve damage so I'm sooo happy about that but that is one of the most painful tests anyone could ever have done and if you don't really need it, don't do it. For me it was a last resort to finding out why my arms and hands go numb and wake up painfully. They say the one for the legs is much worse. I'm learning to be more careful when I stand up as my right foot didn't respond right and I tripped on it and badly sprained it. You live, you learn. Anyway, I'm loving this new fic and I promise to get back to the other soon. I feel as though I've let you all down but I'm glad to see so many reviewers. God bless..Jen
wooo she showed him!
hahhah Oh my God! poor sesshoumaru. Well he deserves that.
I cant wait to hear whats the mystery with inuyasha. update soon please.
Akay (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Jun 2008
*huggs laptop* Oh how I miss thee!! Seven days without drove me nuts - I may never take another cruise again...
Ok, that may not be true, but it most definitely was the longest seven days without interenet I have ever indured. Though I did have loads of fun.
Anyways I'm back!! *huggs laptop tighter* And with new chapters to read - well I already read them considering I'm leaving a review - and I loved ever bit of it. When will Sesshoumaru ever learn? I have quite a few favorite lines from this chapter. One in particular piratequeen0405 has already mentioned. Ooh ooh and what's the mystery on Inuyasha, where the heck did he pop up from? What is Miroku so worried about? Oooooh Sango...
and last but not least: *drumroll* Go Kagome! Go Kagome! lol.
Laterz
Oh goodness! Praises! All around! I'm so glad I played hooky from work today so I could stumble across this update.
I love Kagome's wry personality. You win bonus points for the first fic I've ever read where Sesshomaru (deservedly so) gets kneed in the crotchal area.
Musouka (Chapter 11) - Tue 10 Jun 2008
Lol ... Point 1 For Kagome! Woot Woot! Sesshomaru Is Such A Dog ... LOL ... Well Can't Wait TO Read More!
Oh Good God EP! I felt like I was being seduced for the first three quarters...the language, langor, sensuality...*sigh* Then all Hell breaks loose. Sess underestimates her once again and ends up with a knee to the nads. "You don't get laid much do you mister taisho?" I cackled. Loudly.
I have this picture in my head now. I don't think it will ever leave. I didn't think Sesshoumaru would ever cross his eyes, but they're crossed in my picture. I'm going to be laughing for a week! Thanks.
Tilayha (Chapter 11) - Mon 09 Jun 2008
YEAH!!!!!!!!ROFLMAO!!Now this is what I have been waiting for! Kagome putting Sesshoumaru in 'His' place! You go girl! I love it!!!!!!
Tilayha
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