because our next possibility to leave the enclosure will be earliest in twelve days - it sounds a bit awkward...i suggest changing this part, making it simpler.
internal mail system, a
How long has he been in this condition?
I am much too busy
Believe me when I say that Dr. Yasoda is capable of taking care of your son. Please send your next letter
Again, a few grammatical mistakes I found in this one...
And you..grrrr...I was expecting her to carry on the correspondence herself! NOT hand it over to someone else!
wiriting to you in an attempt to
slowly but surely
so many doctors and healers of all kinds
So please be so kind as to contact
details are attached
Nice opening, and it has my interest. I'll be waiting on this one to end, too, so make sure you finish fast! ^_~
*chanting*
I WANT MORE!! I WANT MORE!!! I WANT MORE!!!!
And you are so bookmarked, listed and stalked. <3
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