Nice ^^d The part where she lept on Miroku and started violently shaking him totally cracked me up. Also, I was pleasantly surprised that one of them turned back to normal already. So it would seem that they only need a taste of their own medicine. I get the feeling that Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's transformation won't be quite as easy as Miroku's *giggles in devilish delight*. I think you're doing a grand job and I can't wait for the next update.
Keep up the good work!
thebookworm90 (Chapter 10) - Fri 09 Sep 2011
Would it help you to know that the poem is origionally supposed to be repeated twice?
=x omg thats rather awesome!
~~HAHAHAHA!!!! Ahhhhh I am SO glad that you updated! XD Seriously great!! Looking forward to more!
Smittee (Chapter 9) - Mon 08 Aug 2011
lol! Sesshy with a bra on his head. Awesome!
O_O
Ooooh, the hair!!! Who are the 0.01% who don't wanna play with it?
Nice new chapter, I'm enjoying this fic a lot! Great work!
lmao HAIR! i cant wait to see Kagome gettig her into a bra! Sess should feel someone up to get a just for his size =x
interesting!
amy (Chapter 6) - Wed 20 Jul 2011
Funny ona stick! more updates pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
~~Man, it's been a while since I read this one, and I was sadly disappointed when it stopped! T___T I hope you haven't given up on this one! It's refreshing and quirky!
0-o0o0o0o0o interesting
amy (Chapter 5) - Sat 21 May 2011
Cute, what will happen next?
Hahaha, this is fantastic! My favorite part, I have to say is Miroku shrieking upon discovering his transformation and then Inuyasha subsequently calling him "Miko". Wonderful ^_^ I laughed very hard when I read it. It made it Miroku's later appreciation of his new...assets...even more hilarious. This is very funny. And as far as how you refer to "he" or "she", I think you're making it clear. I think you're right to still refer to Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru and Miruko as "he", because despite their transformation, they are still male at heart and as the reader, I still think of them in a masucline sense. It doesn't hinder visualizing them as females and I think keeping the masculine pronouns helps avoid confusion. Just my opinion :) I love it, can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!
OMFG!!! peen! *cackles*
this is amusing =x
LMAO hahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahaha
Ahahahahahahahaha I totally love this! And the fact that you're making it a story and not just a one-shot is awesome! Can't wait to see what else you have in mind!
Luna (Chapter 1) - Tue 22 Mar 2011
lol a very interesting start. I cant see where you plan on taking this!
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