you did a good job with the pregnacy part. looking forward to more from you. im glad you didnt go into detail with a lemon. you kept it simple and sometimes simple is good. it was funny to see naraku in a different light than what im used to. i guess you can use the characters from inuyasha any way you choose. good story. i liked it. bye

I adore the way you wrote about Kagome's love of books! That is exactly how I feel about the wonderful written world! Also, I would like to mention how sublime Sesshoumaru and Kagome's first meeting was. I really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to reading more when I have time.

I love this story! thank you so much for writing it.

Oh dear it was lovely story. Normaly I don't like stories hat are written in the point of view of some character, but this one is really, really good. i liked it and I hope you will decide to write something more. Cheers!

NOOOOOO why did it have to end......... your story is really good ........ i like it a lot.