I just reread this story for like the 3rd time. I love it & didn't want it to end. I'd love to read this story from Sessh's P.O.V..I swear it's like he can read minds.Kagome is thinking something & he gives her the answer,a response or the information before she ever asks him a question. Would you ever do a story like this from Sessh's P.O.V. ??
I'm dying to know some things: At the start of the story,she talks of being younger,in the feudal era,going online for her G.E.D.,got a degree online,at 20 acquired a job ,got a license to carry a bow ,left Japan & ended up in the Appalachian Mountains in February with the snow falling.- How old is Kagome in this story?
What did the non-wish/command she made on the Jewel mean? “To all the gods that will listen, let this soul be at rest within the body it was born, and the heritage be passed to its rightful heirs.” What happened to Kagome after?,What did it do to her?, Was Kags a relative or a reincarnation of Midoriko ? ,How did Midoriko give her a heritage mark on her forehead? if Midoriko gave her the mark ,was she an immortal & is she alive ? she mentions the mark is a star... what kind of star & what color ? how's the heritage mark given ?Sessh's beast said only the strongest immortal can wear it but was he thinking only youkai immortal? did the non-wish make her become so powerful & immortal ?
Sessh said that Shippo was unable to find Kagome but, ...Shippo knew Kagome's home was on a shrine where the 'Well' was in Inuyasha's forest so all he'd have to have done was kept checking that location until the shrine was built & watched the people that lived there,gotten the address & phone # or something ,right???
If Inuyasha living or staying somewhere in China can find her address & send her a b-day card ???
I also wanted to know..when Sessh made off-hand comments throughout the story about liking her,was he trying to tell her that he was interested in her? When he didn't leave after meeting the Raccoon tribe did he stay because he'd already decided that since he found her,he didn't plan on letting her get away ?
He said his blood chose her...what did he mean by that?? why did it give her his heritage marks??
Kagome kept thinking horny thoughts after meeting Sessh & it was like she was just realizing that she hadn't had a relationship with a guy since her pseudo one with Inuyasha..did that mean she was a virgin up until Sessh took her?? & when Sessh's beast said he was "claiming his soul" what did it mean?
“Forever. My toxins should have mixed with your own beasts aura. However, your a Priestess. The puncture wounds would have healed with the dominant color of my heritage showing. Like human scars are a different color than the rest of the skin. Except the bite marks would always show in blue. I knew my blood would heal you because it chose you. I didn't know it would mark you with my own heritage like that.”does he know it would be blue because he's had a Mate before or can he have more than one??
I wonder what happened to Rin,Sango & Miroku?
lara (Chapter 1) - Wed 18 May 2011
This was so good. I really enjoyed it. I was surprised that it was written in such a different (first person?) style that I didn't know what to expect before I read it & I was a little unsure of whether to read it at first or not & now I'm so glad I did. I only wish it were longer. I hope I get the opportunity to read more of your writing.
SEB (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Mar 2011
Excellent! Thanks for a refreshing look into Kagome's future.
Midnight Tenshii (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Mar 2011
It was AMAZING!!! I loved it!!!! I hope that you have more work out soon to read. It was a great story and one that hasn't been done before.
TKE (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Mar 2011
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