Reviews for A Debt to Be Paid by Rinku

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KaminokoDaughters (Chapter 7) - Thu 06 Oct 2011

-_- Kagome..... is an idiot. Running out into traffic, what the heck? *shake my head* But I am overjoyed that you updated, even though I was unable to catch it yesterday while drowning myself in Anatomy n Physiology homework. I wanna see some more Sesshou-passion, and I think I feel like I want to smack Kagome.... However, given that she has had this whole situation thrust upon her without any thought to her feelings and wants, I can understand her reluctance to accept Sesshoumaru's attentions. On the other hand, I still wish to smack her for what appears to be a stupid act of running out into traffic. -_- A side question or maybe not so side: Who is Shino???? I've never heard of them before, so is this a made up character they met during their test-prep, or are they a result of a mix up of names? Patiently awaiting the next chapter..... for now, my patience is tentative at best. 

 

--Kaminoko (c)2011

 


JeniNeji (Chapter 1) - Wed 05 Oct 2011

Did I...see this story at FFnet? I think :) The writer said it was re-doing it :nods:


KitElizaKing (Chapter 6) - Wed 05 Oct 2011

I'm really enjoying your story.  It's enough of an interesting twist on the usual plot that it feels newer and fresher.  I have to correct an oopsie in the chapter though.  Contrary to what Kagome said to Sesshoumaru, this world does indeed have Royalty.  Japan has an Emperor.  Britain, Norway, Spain, etc have Royal Families.  The Sauds of Saudi Arabia are their Royalty, and so on. 


Airy (Chapter 7) - Wed 05 Oct 2011

I am following this story on AFF, and I am so glad you have returned. Get all the chapters up on Dokuga soon. I love all these stories, so update Fragile Flower and JUst Roomies too!

                                              -Loyal Follower


kuro (Chapter 7) - Wed 05 Oct 2011

Nice chapter but who is Shion/Shino? Kagome´s three friends are Yuka, Eri and Ayumi. Did you mean Yuka? I have to agree with Sesshoumaru, why is she so afraid of him, she was braver when she was only fifteen and knew she stood no chance against him? Now that she is not as useless as she was in the beginning she is afraid of him and acts rather childish what with her hiding in her room. Really, the situation with Inuyasha is hard enough so I hope she will grow up and do what is right. Poor Inuyasha is even more a victim than her. He must be devastasted for losing her and practically waiting to be killed by Sesshoumaru. I don´t know what you´ve planned but I really don´t want him to die. Though I love the Sess/Kag pairing Inuyasha belongs with Kagome, too. They were the beginning and are best friends and beside her mother, no one knows her better than him.


Sesshoumarucrazy (Chapter 7) - Wed 05 Oct 2011

So glad your back! I really love this story especially with all the demon law aspects. That makes it so interesting!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 7) - Wed 05 Oct 2011

I have been following this one on aff.net. This is a great story. Damn, Demon Law sucks. Hanyous can never catch a break in general. Hopefully, Miroku learns of a way for Inuyasha to live as a hanyou and soon. It's so not fair. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and future chapters.


yasurei (Chapter 6) - Wed 05 Oct 2011

There is no royalty in her time? Then what is the Tennó, the Emperor from Japan? Why do you write ya instead of yeah? Is it some kind of dialect from where you come from? I really pity Inuyasha here, if someone deserves to be happy with Kagome it would be him. Are you sure you don´t want to make this into a threesome?


Smortz (Chapter 6) - Wed 05 Oct 2011

Ugh, this chapter was so good. Heck, this story is good! I love the way you portray Sesshomaru! It is just awesome! Poor Kagome, she doesn't stand a chance! 

Can't wait for the next chapter!!! 

~Smo


KaminokoDaughters (Chapter 6) - Wed 05 Oct 2011

So..... In my imaginary world, today marks a new week.... so could I have the next chapter please??? *puppy dog eyes* Pleasseeeeeee!!!!!!  I am in love with the character interactions and the real struggle between wanting to see Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha win you've produced within readers. You feel so bad for Inuyasha but still you know Sesshoumaru is the one you wish to see win and suceed. It's like the struggle within the story has transcended the page and entered the hearts of readers. The struggle of the characters is real and tangible. It is simply magnificient. The character play, the plot, the descriptions, and the grammar and spelling, it's all completely on point, simply fantastic!!! Oh my goodness, don't get me started on how much I adore this story. Oh my dear wonderful kami, the last tidbit of Sesshoumaru's display of passion. I want to read more. I want to drown myself in it.  I must say although I had to sit through a brief or moderate wait for this update, I must say, I appreciate the fact that your computer broke because now, I can count on a steady stream of chapters. -_- I just wish I could read them right now. :(

I beg, I plead, I get down on my hands and knees and beseech you to hurry the heck up and let me read the next chapter darn it!!!! :D  I can't take it. I need it. NOW!!!!

 

--Kaminoko (c)2011


Ana (Chapter 6) - Tue 04 Oct 2011

It's been ages since I wanted Inuyasha to win. :/ I feel like a traitor!!!!!

>.>


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Nyuka (Chapter 3) - Wed 11 May 2011

Awe, no more chapters, how sad... though I suppose not everything is how I want it to be.  Inuyasha's situation is so sad does that mean he could never find love?  Will he be doombed to wander the planet alone for the remader of his life?  And what of these demon laws he supposably broke...Sesshomaru said he had broken all of them...when ..and How?   and did...well did Inuyasha accidently kill his mom?  Nice to read more.....later

 

Nyuka


Kitsune Diva (Chapter 3) - Sat 09 Apr 2011

I like your story.


Ceysna (Chapter 2) - Wed 09 Mar 2011

Well this looks like it'll be an interesting tale. Looking forward to mor updates! Keep up the great work! *grins* Milk him for what he's worth Kags!!


Airy (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Mar 2011

I am so glad to see you here from AFF. I have been following this story ever since you started it. I can not wait to see the other chapters come up. Update soon.


sousie (Chapter 2) - Sun 06 Mar 2011

update


amy (Chapter 2) - Sat 05 Mar 2011

WONDERFUL,MORE UPDATES!


Ana (Chapter 2) - Sat 05 Mar 2011

hahah dokuga is going to be the death of me..

gahhhh i should be doing hw and what not since i have a test on monday... :o

but noooooooooooooooooooooooo i'm addicted to fanfics....

congrats.. you are feeding ma addiction... ;D


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