“You are like a puppy, seeking warmth and reassurance in a alien place,” he commented as his glorious spun silver hair fanned out around them, immersing Kagome in his delicious scent.
“You’re the puppy,” she mumbled sleepily, latching onto a lock of his hair and winding it around her index finger. Sesshoumaru rolled his eyes, secure in the knowledge that she couldn’t see the gesture in the dimly lit room.
SO CUTE!!!
Lillian (Chapter 16) - Tue 13 Sep 2011
OF COURSE! A review! I love leaving reviews! Here! A review!
They kisseeed. They kissed when he was awake. And then, he kissed her again, with slightly different purposes. OH HO HO!
Attraction. It begins, not that it hadn't already begun, but that was one-sided, I think and so.... *mumbles*
You know... of all the really bad and annoying 'fluffy' nicknames Sesshomaru acquires in fanfiction I must say 'fluffy-zilla' is by far my favorite! ^_^
For the record, I actually had to stop reading for a good half hour due to laughter complications after Nami lost her fight with the same temptation. It was just too much: Kagome running back to try and hold to her manners only to be trounced up like a taken woman. And that Nami would laugh like that... teehee. Booyaka! Too much. Too awesome.
Thanks so much for writing!
hazel (Chapter 15) - Wed 07 Sep 2011
It was great!! =] Please continue updating!! =3
martha (Chapter 15) - Wed 07 Sep 2011
Sweet nice chapter love the Fluff-zilla coment
OMG. Fluff-zilla. ROFLMAO!! OMG, OMG, ... must... catch... breath.... I've NEVER heard that one before! AWESOME! Oh, and I'll have you know I had to look up Brobdingnagian, or whatever. Never read (or watched) Gulliver's Travels, but now I know. Cool reference! Fluff-zilla... <breaks out into uncontrollable peals of laughter. Again>
"Fluff-zilla"?! Awesome!!
Ah! A new nick-name for our fluffy hero! Beware Tokyo! Fluffy-zilla is on the loose. XD
Great story.
TrianaStyx (Chapter 15) - Tue 06 Sep 2011
Fluff-zilla!!!! Yay!!!! Such an awesome chapter! Can't wait till you update again! Loving this story! One of my favorites!
this made me giggle... LOTS
Once again, love the story so far... but you gotta lose 'nubile' as an adjective regarding Sesshoumaru. Merriam-Webster sez- Nubile: of marriageable condition or age; or, sexually attractive —used of a young woman. Don't trust solely in your thesaurus on your word processor, as it is a faithless liar which will lead you astray =D
I'd simply use 'handsome' because Sessh most certainly is that.
Fluffzilla! ..... I laughed so hard when I read that I almost dropped my laptop!
Anonymous (Chapter 15) - Tue 06 Sep 2011
I love the puppy comment and the Fluff-zilla. I can't wait until the next chapter.
"Many here do love a tasty human maiden." and "and brought a snack." Both had me laughing so hard...
KT (Chapter 15) - Tue 06 Sep 2011
AWWW such a cute chapter! Yes, a nice big fluffy dog... Fluff-zilla ;D
Thanks so much for the update!
Karen-not the author (Chapter 15) - Tue 06 Sep 2011
Hello! Sorry to say I'm stuck on "Fluff-zilla"...just can't stop chuckling about it! Love the story too!
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