this seems like a decent one. please update some new chaps soon. i just might die of boredom if you don't.

I like the story but there's only 2 chapters you should add more

The story is funny, i really like it. I hope that there is more to the challenge so you can update.

I love your story lol so cute :) I can't wait to see how it all develops. Please upload soon I can't wait to see how her date with koga goes lol make seshy jealous 

This was great! I wish I could think of a better word for it, but 'it's great' is all that is coming to mind right now. I would have reviewed both chapters but really wanted to read the second part(laughs) sorry!

I love how you wrote their history and their interactions with one another. C:

The first chapter had a sweet feel to it, while the second had sweet/humor, a great read over all if I do say so myself. Sorry for not leaving a more detailed review(still half asleep) but good job!