this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait for more.

bwahahaha what is up with mokomoko? why is it such a pervert?lol

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

What a chapter! LOOL Finally the mating... :D *kukukuk* LOL Mokomoko... that thing is priceless! LOOL

PLS!! Update soon!! :D

cheers

All i can really say is HURRY UP!!!! I cant wait for the next chapter!!

I'm beginning to think  Mokomoko would like to either have her instead.....or maybe he just wants to share--silly fluff. lolz

OMFG hahahahahahahahaha

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I love your story I cant wait to see how sesshy and kagome bond. 

cute! go Sess! i really hope that Kira comes in and lobs heads off.

Naw its good to be well rounded its something I am currently working on in my own stories...XD  So she is returning...we shall see if its for the good ....na?

Nyuka

Rain.....That's an odd scent. I wonder what it means to Kira.

Looking forward to the next chapter. <3

...Raiden sounds like a violent sleeze. I would of run away too.

XD I love mokomoko in this fanfic. You wrote him with an awesome personality. (if you can call it that) <3

But mokomoko is so suft and fluffy! Who wouldn't want to sleep with one cuddled up to you? Silly Kagome.

I'm finding this amazingly funny!  Though I am a little lost as to what Inuyasha's story is. I suppose you will get to that?

Or maybe I'll be reading it in a couple chapters. I'm going to read on and find out. <3

oh wow thatos so awesome! font change! and that hooker! omg i hope Kira's mate gets a beating!

While it was amusing, you really need to work on your spelling/basic, basic grammar skills.

Sesshomaru's character was poorly portrayed, and Kagome was too.. bleh. I don't even know what to call her. She wasn't Kagome, that's for sure.

If anything, the story's Kagome sounds like how you might react in the story.

Anyway, it wasn't really that good of a story. It was funny at times, but nothing too entertaining.

She called him a.... omg... ROFLMAO!!! That was GREAT!!!! I can't wait for the next installment!!

lmao =x mokmokos gunna die =x